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LOC: United Kingdom
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LAST LOGIN: January 29
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 29
The photo is of me.
The cigarette is probably a Benson & Hedges Gold or a Camel (Original) given my preference for these brands. However the photo is from a club night, so the cigarette could have come from anywhere.
The t-shirt is from a uniqlo store in causeway bay in hong-kong. It is a ‘unique’ item in that only a handful of copies of this print were made. The Sketch was by some Japanese dude with a massive afro. His photo was on the price tag. The tee cost about five pounds.
Uniqlo are a superb company providing exceptional quality given their standard price range.
This is the best photo I could find on facebook.
Perhaps I just don’t have the strength to stand in daylight and hold a steady gaze. Perhaps because I keep my hea…
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Men, admittedly not this one but I'm stereotyping (as opposed to monotyping, which I do when I'm smoking), are addicted to danger. Obvoiously a crossbar is about as dangerous as yakult. But if you run a red because you're late for class and end up spending double latin with matron's freshest icepack slowly melting though your slacks, you realise testing one's mettle on a bike requires and threatens the most grotesquely swollen cojones. At the same time the structural advantages of a crossbar ...
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The Ferryman 'So then, this is an introduction I'm not sure I should I be making. 'But it's not going to be much of an introduction I'm afraid, since I won't be compicating things with my name. And what's an introduction without names exchanged eh? 'Our purpose today is better served by an acquaintance with my job than myself. 'Joshua is a fisherman isn't pelasant phrase - surely the man does something other than fish. He is a man, oftentimes perhaps to be caught fishing, but a man lov...
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There is a pack of Swan ‘Extra Slim’ filter tips on her desk. Which is chestnut. Once it was used to write letters. At the lip the varnish is worn from the press of forearms writing. These patches show wood. Though dark some angles in some lights show golden. I know, now, she is blonde. Now we strip the varnish with ourselves. The dry brittle film fractures into our skin. Underneath the wood is warm. One stick of filters tips has rolled under her. Her skin rocks, over and back, ab...
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I saw today that newgrounds has been approved by the chinese government as acceptable for it's people to view. This remedial exculpation left a brief euphoria in it's wake. Not because I relished the invocation of franchise and it wasn't a three cheers for china kind of thing. Nor was it an ecstatic empathy for the three hundred million chinese who finally enjoy 'Everything, by Everyone' and the ensuing deluge of home brew flash. Humans can make rotgut moonshine from anything, certainly...
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Fag-end, bag-men Tokin up your stubbings. Hi you Joe; That’s my damn bin Get your scabies off my things! Sup up your fine blend of Scotch Go where cool cats lindy-hop Bet you’re feelin’ tip-top-notch I ain’t never felt so low Red night, dark light She’s Amsterdam, In stained tights: Sane sucking cock Or a crack pipe. Plunge in the goose-flesh With your knife. So get your great red lolly-Pop Go where cool kids Lindy hop Bet your feeling tip-to...
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first off ignore ratings: Ihave no time for a dozen meaningless 'publishable' criteria. 'she's heard that for so many days' - can't make the arrythmic verbosity fit; unless implied time wasted etc is being flagged as a nagging uncomfortable line of thought for someone so immersed, without being all 'and it pained her to pour herself into such BS...', Rythm rhyme allpushing around too strongly throughout for any coherent mood, for me. eg: 'That's rife' yep, worth emphasising her emphasis on ex...
Well I'm interested, but mainly because I want to know if this is actually the author's premise, not just the story's. Honestly I can't discern a specific hook. There's a lot of images and themes (mainly nostalgia and romance, which are - and this is v good - suggested and effectively in play from the first 'my life started...', I imagine if this was published that would be a candidate for tagline) that I'm semi-enticed by. A hook leaves you wanting conclusion and information and satisfaction...
'praise and tenderness', tender praise might work, but. She's surprised because nobody ever has these two specific concepts shining out of their face. Also I think 'that key held her breath' is a typo? From what little I can read of the standard prose, I'd say there's a fairly developed and efficient fantasy style on display. 'forgive me this once if I can't speak it well' For some tribal cultures (and, I think, the sandpeople in Star Wars) story-telling traditions are too important to be lef...
Cool i like this, whcich is rare on urbis. Especially the first stanza, which is superb. Don't know what's going on in with 'freedom labs' and their virus, please explain Also not familiar with precincts, being a brit. What is the significance of the 'first and last precincts'? I hope this will improve my understanding of the poems meaning, since atm it's a love story (first two stanza's) that suddenly takes a dramatic hit when she dies. I'd be considerably happier if the device used to bridg...
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