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AGE:
23
LOC: Toledo, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 19
LOC: Toledo, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 19
I have a stone reflection, I live in the what might have beens. Everyday gives me another reason not to continue. I am one of the Wretched.
Nothing ever turns out the way I want it to. I feel like no one knows what it feels like, wish they could know what it feels like. The only way for them to know though is to be like me. I feel like I’m stuck in a hole, can’t believe my life is actually like this.
Everytime I try to make things good, I’m back at the beginning. I can no longer pretend, only waiting for the day that I am free. This world has rejected me and threw me away without never really giving me a chance. They are lucky I don’t have super powers or I would make this whole world pay.
Can’t wait till the end of the ear…
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I’m smiling, You’re holding me, You say you only live for me. No matter what we keep smiling, Everyone looks at us like we’re freak shows coming out to play. Dancing in the rain in the middle of the streets, All the horns beeping behind you and me. We just keep dancing to the rhythm of the thunder; No one can distract me. *Chorus* Why did you say goodbye? Why did you walk out of my life? I’m not listening to those lies, I need something else to get me through this...
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We live in a very dangerous world today. I was talking to an elderly lady not too long ago and she was telling me that she remembered a time where you could leave your keys in the ignition and not worry about someone stealing her car. She remembers how she could have her house unlocked and not having anyone rob her…she is sadden now with how violent and cruel the world has become over the years. We are literally at the end of days. It is inevitable, we are going to destroy ourselves or...
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The glass is half empty and the darkness engulfs all the light. That’s the way I view life…that is the way I see everything. Roses have thorns that will prick your fingers and make you bleed, the bees humming near you means that you might get a sting. I lay down trying to forget the world…everything and everyone that is involved with it. We grow older everyday; our skin slowly decaying with each breath that we take, while our insides slowly die and give out. Everything aro...
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I listen to love songs on the radio, and over the years I have realized that the word love has been so overused that no one really knows what it is anymore. I remember what it was like as a child to dream about love, watching it on movies and reading it in my Disney stories. Everyone wanted to be like Cinderella or sleeping beauty waiting for their prince. Then as an adult you realize something very important about relationships…love is merely attachment. My parents have been ma...
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Wasting time chasing dreams, Wasting time thinking of memories. Wasting time laying here thinking. I want to forget everything, I’m getting older everyday. All that I ever was, Has left to yesterday. I don’t where to find myself, I’m confused with only a few hours left, A few hours to make a decision. Let me lay a little longer, Even though I’m broken.
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I really hope that no one goes with baking their crush cookies,hehe although guess it did happen in the new 90210. I really liked your entry though, writing is usually the easiest form to communicate with creative people. Recejtion is a scary thought though...so you will write a million pages but that person will never see 1. Well written.
I think that is is beautiful, I love the way you worded things. You can definitely picture how he feels about her...how perfect she is in his eyes. The only thing that I really have to critique on is this line "as he studies her supple skin about her face, looking for the slightest of flaws, none God has dropped an angel enigmatically from heaven itself" The word just none doesn't flow with the rest of the sentance. Maybe there were none. Besides that this was one of the most beautiful poems ...
I really enjoyed this piece because I think that it will ring true to a lot of people. In todays world it is really hard to find someone who actually loves their jobs and they really dont' think about the hump days. That's because it's not a job to them it is literally an enjoyable part of them. I miss being a kid too, everything was easier then...everything was fun and beautiful...but now we have to grow up and we are in the buisness world...and you are completely right, you gain the respect...
I absolutely loved this piece. I especially enjoyed reading the time lines...I've always been a fan of history so I found all of that to be very interesting. We are always at war...always in a time of turmoil. We all need to realize that we are human beings...but at the same time I know human beings do this things because it is imbdedded in us...and it is also a population control. We eliminate eachother...or we get diseases...it's all really sad. I wish there was peace, but I know that would...
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