I loved it! And i must say that to me your words are very very very very very very veryg good!! I loved this poem!!!!!!! ! lool! wow it think you did a good job with this. I too love to write and so I know a good poem when i see one! lol!!! keep writting

hey Sy, Gosh Io love this poem. I miss her even though I only met her a few times. She as awsome!!! lol!! Anyway, I'll ask people to review this and maybe you'll get more. Sorry if this is spelled wronge and stuff but my Nanny's computer has all of the letters scratched off. [Sheused to typre for the hospitle so she used this keyboard]. Havce you gotten Miley's CD yet? Its very very very good. But her wig is messed up on the covewr. Anyway, she wrote all her songs. I know thiswill cost you al...

Personaly, I think a rather good poem. I loved how you used words that not many people use anymore. you know? I love how you chose a different topic, instead of writting about puppy and kittens nd all that happy stuff, you wrote about somthing that wasn't particularyly happy. I liked it, again, and think its safe to assume that you enjoy writting. Honestly, their were a few words I didn't understand but that's just because of my age. Keep Writting!

i AGGREE WITH THE FIRST RE VIEWER! LOL! I like the rhythm and how this flows from one stanza to another. I might change the first stanza. It does nOt seem to flow like the others do. For some reason it seems bumpy. bUT ALSO LIKE YOUR FIRST REVIEWER, i KNOW VERY VERY VERY LITTLE A BOUT POETRY. oTHER THAN THAT, i THINK ITS A VERY GOOD POEM

Wow! what a great poem! I got the clear picture and could fully understand what you were talking about.

I enjoyed it alot. You have a good handle on descriptive writting. I enjoyed this alot! Although, in my opion, poems sound better when they ryme. It keeps the reader interested and alert.