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AGE: 23
LOC: Danville, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 21

Hi. my name is Whitney, I’m 23 yrs old. I love reading and writing. I just started getting into writing poems and reading them. I like chatting on the internet and meeting new ppl, I love listening to eminem and other rap artists but he’s my fav. I love reading books, (Romantic) is my fav, and I think Nora Robert’s is my favorie author. Reading is my most fav thing to do besides surf the interent. I like playing pool on here and being on myspace. u can check me out at myspace.com/wittyditty or whitneynelson91@yahoo.com I know sometimes when u use the URL it doesn’t work. it happends to me all the time. I’m a sweet person to get to know, I’m down to earth, I’m a very determinde person, I like chatting on yahoo messager. I enjoy going for …

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Poetry / Have You Ever Been Me?
Version 5
2 Reviews   1 Comment
Have You Ever Been Me? I wish you could be me for one day and feel what I feel. My world is full of phantoms Maybe you have seen these apparitions too Loneliness seems to be my only friend I live in silence. Have you ever listened to nothingness? I try to express my feeling in prose A cry for help I suppose. Is this what you do sometimes? I grieve for something that has no name. Maybe you can relate. I try not to think of my pain. But it is always there, hovering like a dark cloud before a ra...
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Poetry / STRESSED
Version 3
6 Reviews   2 Comments
STRESSED I am stressed, stressed, stressed right down to the vest. I pace and I pace with my heart racing. I can't sit or stand my minds a racing as I keep on pacing. I try to sit but can't so I stand up and keep on pacing while my heart keeps on racing.
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Poetry / REST
Version 3
5 Reviews   2 Comments
My minds needs a rest because that’s the best. If only I knew how to control my mind, my thoughts, my angry moods, I would be able to sleep better too. I go to to bed when I’m tired and wake up late, that’s something that I hate. I always debate with what I could do, so I sit and ponder on what I should do. So I just sit there and type without a clue. I look at the clock and it’s after two. I get up and get my bed ready wondering how long till I fall asleep, or when it will over come me. So a...
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Poetry / STRESSFUL PAIN
Version 5
5 Reviews   2 Comments
STRESSFUL PAIN My minds going berserk as I try and read my book. My mind feels unrestrained with my stressful pain. I hope I can regain to my normal state of mind. But with school on my brain, I'm in pain all the time. People don't understand me and think me unkind. So what am I to do this time? How am I suppost to unwind from this stressful pain all the time?
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Poetry / New to Poerty
Version 1
10 Reviews   12 Comments
I'm new at this as you can see. I'm new at this as could be. Some people like my rhymes Some think I need more time to work. They have said to read some books. It's hard to sit and think, without any previous work. With writing my poems, its hard to not repeat. It's easyer for me to put together sort, simply, easy and sweet. But I doubt this is any better, then my other three. I know Im not with the times, I know I need to read some rhymes. I know I need alot of work, to read some poem books...
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Poetry / Natures' Way
by oknapp
i really like all ur poems, they are all nice and flow easly right down the page to the end. but....who is Lynn?? did she/he write this poem? i don't see anything wrong with it. i did see however an extra space i this line:a shadow play for the boundary trees & the streaked violet sky other then that i don't see anything else wrog with it. all of ur poems are my fav. what was this poem called b4?
Non-fiction / Six Word Memoir
by oknapp
Over all i think u did a great great job, i dont know what pulitzer is tho, but other then that it was good. :D maybe next time u could define a word at the top under "Notes for the reviewer just in case they don't know what a word means (ME) over all u did a very good job. :D keep it up!
Poetry / The Masterpiece
by Corruptedstatic
WOW!! that was some poem, i loved how the words just flowed right down to the end of the page, u are so gifted. it was nice, sweet,short and awesome. it also had spark right down to the end too. fab fab fab job. i don't see anything wrong with this poem at all. good work.
Flash Fiction / On a Date with Fall Fashion
by drbailey
that was a very nice story, i think u might have something there. i wanted to know more about them both..maybe u could write a book about this couple from where they met and see where that takes u. nice work. i think u might have made it a tiny tiny bit to short tho. i thik a few exrta lines could work. try it and see. hope this helped!!
Poetry / Christmas Mission
by gbryananderson
that was a very unusually poem that i have ever read, it was good but also werid at the same time. u do good work tho. i think u need to stick with one subject in a poem, in this poem u did very well but u talked about different things, ghosts,sunsets,frost.discolored piss, christ-child stars dancing,crooked angels,fallen needles, christmas bulbs, there are all sorts of stuff in here that really don't go together and it was not oranized to where it flowed together. u could retype it and talk ...
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