eminemslove85's profile

AGE: 24
LOC: Danville, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 17

Hi. my name is Whitney, I’m 23 yrs old. I love reading and writing. I just started getting into writing poems and reading them. I like chatting on yahoo messager, and meeting new ppl, I love listening to rap music I love reading books, (Romantic) Nora Robert’s is my favorie author.I like surfing the internet and playing games. My favorite games are pool & crunchy Munch, (pac-man) I am going to college and I am going into internet design, I am enjoying my classes so far. I like being on Myspace, yahoo messager, myyarbook.com URBIS, myspace IM.

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My minds needs a rest because that’s the best. If only I knew how to control my mind, my thoughts, my angry moods, I would be able to sleep better too. I go to to bed when I’m tired and wake up late. That’s something that I hate. I always debate with what I could do. So I just sit there and type without a clue. I look at the clock and it’s after two. I get up and get my bed ready. Always wondering how long till I fall asleep, or when it will over come me. S...

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I am stressed, stressed stressed right down to the vest. I pace and I pace with my heart quite racing. Oh, I can´t sit or stand! No, I can´t sit and stand! My mind´s so racing as I keep on pacing. Oh, I try so to sit, but I can´t! Yes, I try, but I shan´t! So I stand!!!

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Version 1

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Ive been in silent pain since i was 13, confused and dazed as I go. I feel it in my chest and my soul, I wonder how far this will go, before I brake and shatter like glass. All my life I have gone threw this, I always wonder when this will end. I am so tired of it all, I could just fall into little peaces and just wait for someone to come and sweep me away. I always want to scream and shout at everyone about everything just to get it all out. Ive lived threw...

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Have You Ever Been Me? I wish you could be me for one day and feel what I feel. My world is full of phantoms, Once filled with color and texture drained into dark and colorless. Maybe you have seen these apparitions too Loneliness seems to be my only friend I live in silence. Have you ever listened to nothingness? I try to express my feeling in prose A cry for help I suppose. Is this what you do sometimes? I grieve for something that has no name. Maybe you can relate. I try not...

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Life as a Future Writer I’m tired of all work and no play. I Sit before my computer and study all day I eat, drink, and visit friends whenever I can. Then im back to square one again. I finally make it home and give it a rest. So that I’ll be alert when I take my tests. It seems that studying is all I do anymore I get up groggy, get dressed and go out the door I am off again to my learning institution. I really have to work to maintain my constitutio...

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by chasingdreams1

I really liked the flow of the peom and its very nice and sweet to write for a loved one but i did see alot of misspelled words: Stert=Start, threw= through. i think if you change and make these words right it would be better. hope this helps and good luck.

by Th3_Grunt

i read ur pome and i like it very much but u missed spelled a word. in this part of ur poem "I curse myself for having down nothing, but I justify, it just wasn’t my problem." u missed spelled the word done. it says down. it will flow easyer if it is spelled the right way. other then that i think ur poem is nice. great work.

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