wow!! u r such a good writer. ur poems r so powerful and they really tell u a story. nice job

wow!! that was such a powerfulful poem and a sad one too. it was very deep. i like how u write. i kinda write like that but not as deep, im still learning to really get deep inside me and put everything out. nice job.

wow another great poem. ur last poem drowning made my heart race and so did this one. im kinda shaking too but they were all great.

wow!! im so sorry to hear about that. this is the deepest poem that i have every read, its so deep down deeper then anything even deeper then mine. i hope each and that u will get better.

i read ur poem and i thought that is was very pretty and it flowed just right down the page. i thought that you did a very nice job putting the words in the right place of each other so it makes a very pretty poem. good luck with the next one

hello there, i read ur poem and i really liked it. i like how it flowed right down to the very end. it was really good.

I read ur poem and i thought it was really good. it had spunk and it was very easy going and it flowed every easly till the end.

i read ur pome and i like it very much but u missed spelled a word. in this part of ur poem "I curse myself for having down nothing, but I justify, it just wasn’t my problem." u missed spelled the word done. it says down. it will flow easyer if it is spelled the right way. other then that i think ur poem is nice. great work.

I really liked the flow of the peom and its very nice and sweet to write for a loved one but i did see alot of misspelled words: Stert=Start, threw= through. i think if you change and make these words right it would be better. hope this helps and good luck.