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AGE: 14
LOC: Jupiter, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 13

i am writting a coupel book and hope to get my material published.
i’m fourteen and kinda retarded, but i love it!

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Poetry / why
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Losing him was hard enough, why do you want to keep talking about it, just to see the tears fall from my face? every time we talk, you tear at the wounds on my heart. do you enjoy my pain? I know i deserved more time with him, why do you have to keep reminding me? i know he is with me, but i feel so alone, and you don't help that! i wish i could just be in his arms one last time, and yours are not the same! stop trying to take his place. YOU ARE NOT HIM!! why can't you just und...
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Young Adult / Life Line chapter 4
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                                                 Chapter 4     “Will…?” called Scott from outside the bathroom door, where I had locked myself in. “Willow, you have to come out at some point.” He sighed. “...
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Young Adult / Life Line Chapeter one
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Life line By: emmettrose19                                               Chapter 1       All of my memories of my mother are of her yelling and screaming. She… she never wanted me. She wanted my perfect sister, of course… just never ...
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Poetry / Change
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Change; an inevidabel and sometimes dreaded part of life. Change happens quick; Change happens when you least expect it; Change can come in the beautiful form of a newborn child, or in the horiffic form of death. Change can come at the worst of times and disrupt your life; Change!  
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Poetry / exceptence
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 You look at me, but do you understand what you see? You try to change me, like I'm not good enough. But if you really took the time, to look inside my mind, you would find, the one thing left behind, is exceptance. I keep going out into this world, I keep trying to find my way, but then I think about the next day. I look tword the next moment, anything to get away, and I try to forget what you said. I'm always looking in, looking for, exceptance.
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i like how it is about the insainity that war brings on. and i also love the metaphors used here. i reallly don't think you should change anything. i like it the way it is. great job!
Poetry / Denial
it is a very sweet passionat peom. and i like that it kind of has that thrill factor that you are doing things you shouldn't. good job.
Poetry / Sister Two
i am not sure i understand. is the girl dead? but over all it was pretty good. although it would be "She spoke and spoke" not "Spoked" just so you know.
Poetry / Changing America
i like your message, but one part confused me. i don't know who you where referring to when you said "policies from Congress should be denied adoption." other then that i loved it! great work. hope you put more pieces up.
Poetry / He Has Gone
i absoutly loved this piece! i lost my dad so this really hits home. your writing feels very real, great job!
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Poetry / Good-Bye
Lyrics / Alzheimer's
Stage Play / Promise
Quotes / True Love

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