esotericgirl's profile
AGE:
31
LOC: NY, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 31
LOC: NY, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 31
I am an actress and filmmaker who has been writing screenplays for about ten years now. I appreciate everyone’s opinion, so thanks for the reviews.
P.S. I’ve noticed there is a lot of questionable screenplay formatting on this site and I’ve found a place online where you can download a trial version of Final Draft for free ( http://breakingin.net/toctsw.htm ). This should solve all formatting problems for any writing medium:-)
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OPENING CREDITS ROLL FADE IN: INT. CAR - DAY CLOSE ON EVIE (an 11-12 year old girl with an already very developed body and a beautiful, innocent, young face), wearing her catholic school uniform, sits in the passengers seat looking out the window as BOBBIE (50’s - 60’s; an attractive, proper, picture perfect woman) drives while smoking a cigarette and lecturing EVIE. BOBBIE Evie, I don’t want to hear any of your excuses. It’s on the way to the supermarket and the lines for the confessional ar...
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INT. THE CHRISTNER HOUSE - KEVIN'S BEDROOM -- NIGHT BITSY, with red painted lips and a very red dress, and carrying a basket covered in a Venetian-Red cloth, walks into the room followed by KEVIN. KEVIN So what is it? BITSY unveils the contents of her basket; there is an ice bucket filled with ice, a bottle of spring water, two glasses, a bottle opener and a bottle of J. EDOUARD PERNOT ABSINTHE. KEVIN (CONT'D) Absinthe!? BITSY J. Edouard Pernot Absinthe, thank you very much. I smuggled it bac...
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EXT. ROAD - NIGHT A WHITE 1968 FORD MUSTANG COUPE drives down the road through a rain storm. It is extremely dark and the only light around comes from the car itself. A SHINY PURPLE HELMET with a WHITE EAGLE DECAL on it sits in the middle of the road ahead. A BRIGHT WHITE LIGHTENING BOLT STRIKES THE HELMET THE WHITE MUSTANG comes to a screeching halt. The car stays stopped for a moment when the drivers side door opens and ARVEL CALLISTO (30's; extremely good looking, bearded man), gets out. H...
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Very sad:-( I hope that if this is autobiographical that you've reached out to someone. Otherwise, very convincing in its simplicity. Good work and good luck.
Good work! I especially like the 5 last lines. Can't wait to see more from you. Good luck.
I love this one and I agree wholeheartedly. Keep them coming! I love these quotes you keep posting. Is this one yours or did you find it somewhere?
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