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LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 16
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 16
hey, my name is luke and im currently 27 years old living in the country city town of adelaide. i do not classify myself as a writer but i do find that writing helps me express alot of my inner feelings.
i do have a differnet writing style where as i write purely what im thinking at the time and do not divert from this. i wont spend hours re-writing somehting to perfect. i rather leave it in its most natural form.
from what you read you will see this purity is pretty deep within me.
i mainly write about my feelings or experiences.
i do hope you enjoy and please let me know what you think and maybe where i can better my style.
sincerely
luke
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I sometimes use to feel invisable, as if no one new that I really existed. Days and weeks went by, looseing myself in the world as we know it. Then something changed, it was the day I met her. The touch of her hand sends shivers through out my body, quivering at the aspect that for no reason other than a sense of loving to reach out and touch me gently. Her breath on the side of my neck revealing to me that I am truly alive. her eyes so mystifying captures me in a state of daze. Her words so ...
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I sometimes use to feel invisable, as if no one new that I really existed. Days and weeks went by, looseing myself in the world as we know it. Then something changed, it was the day I met her. The touch of her hand sends shivers through out my body, quivering at the aspect that for no reason other than a sense of loving to reach out and touch me gently. Her breath on the side of my neck revealing to me that I am truly alive. her eyes so mystifying captures me in a state of daze. Her words so ...
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i sometimes use to feel invisable as if no one new that i really existed days and weeks went by loosing myself in the world as we know it then something changed it was the day i met her the touch of her hand sends shivers throught my body quivering at the aspect that for no reason other than a sense of loving to reach out and touch me gently her breath on the side of my neck revealing to me that i am truly alive her eyes so mystifying captures me in a state of daze her words so intelligent an...
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as if time stands still i see so clearly now that life is what one makes of it, the thought of disbelief is just an illusion, one that no matter what should be overlooked, embrace the moment and charge forward, if you look back you will no doubt falter and fail, take what could be yours, believe in yourself and all that you want, take this advice and use it wiseley, as ones doing can be there unwinding.
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here we are in the glow of the moonlight standing as if frozen in time. its moments like these i ask for it to last for all eternity. but they come and go replaced by another and this time its new unlike the last but just as precious and you wish not now and not just for this moment but every mement that is to follow to remind us of the preciousness of time. the gift we are given that is forever taken for granted. but you ask from this moment on that every moment become as sacred as the ones ...
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i read this as if the rose is a journey thru time. not only with love but also life experiences. as the journey unfolds the flower flourishes and we learn from it what we can. as the journey comes to an end the rose slowly dies and the journey complete. only to be replaced by another journey we are to soon to expereince. alot like love and some of the downsides to it. " but i also look at it as that when you say but in the garden of my soul among all the thorny branches are always new buds of...
as i read this i imagine past expereinces that still affect me today. those just dont seem to fade away. as i always say these expereinces although painful are there to be learnt from. sometimes its hard to find that lesson but it lies somewhere within you. everything happens for a reason and we must grow stronger from these expereinces. take a negative and if you look hard enough you will gain a positive. short but straight to the point. really enjoyed it. luke
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