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I sometimes use to feel invisable, as if no one new that I really existed. Days and weeks went by, looseing myself in the world as we know it. Then something changed, it was the day I met her. The touch of her hand sends shivers through out my body, quivering at the aspect that for no reason other than a sense of loving to reach out and touch me gently. Her breath on the side of my neck revealing to me that I am truly alive. her eyes so mystifying captures me in a state of daze. Her words so ...
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I sometimes use to feel invisable, as if no one new that I really existed. Days and weeks went by, looseing myself in the world as we know it. Then something changed, it was the day I met her. The touch of her hand sends shivers through out my body, quivering at the aspect that for no reason other than a sense of loving to reach out and touch me gently. Her breath on the side of my neck revealing to me that I am truly alive. her eyes so mystifying captures me in a state of daze. Her words so ...
Version 1
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i sometimes use to feel invisable as if no one new that i really existed days and weeks went by loosing myself in the world as we know it then something changed it was the day i met her the touch of her hand sends shivers throught my body quivering at the aspect that for no reason other than a sense of loving to reach out and touch me gently her breath on the side of my neck revealing to me that i am truly alive her eyes so mystifying captures me in a state of daze her words so intelligent an...
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as if time stands still i see so clearly now that life is what one makes of it, the thought of disbelief is just an illusion, one that no matter what should be overlooked, embrace the moment and charge forward, if you look back you will no doubt falter and fail, take what could be yours, believe in yourself and all that you want, take this advice and use it wiseley, as ones doing can be there unwinding.
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here we are in the glow of the moonlight standing as if frozen in time. its moments like these i ask for it to last for all eternity. but they come and go replaced by another and this time its new unlike the last but just as precious and you wish not now and not just for this moment but every mement that is to follow to remind us of the preciousness of time. the gift we are given that is forever taken for granted. but you ask from this moment on that every moment become as sacred as the ones ...
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if your asking if i need you the answer is forever, if your asking if ill leave you the answer is never, if your asking what i want the answer is you and if your asking if i love you the answer is i do.
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i am a bleeding soul whos pain knows no end i sometimes feel as if the world is squeezing me crushing me to teach me something what is it i must learn from what i have seen what must i learn from what i have felt why must the most beautiful things we have in our lives dissapear i cant help but feel that sometimes its my fault that i am the cause of what has happened its a self burden that should never be felt after all we know within ourselves that we can change a situation but you cant chang...
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i shall pass this way but once, any good therefore that i can do or any kindness that i can show to any person let me do it now. let me not deter or neglect this opportunity for i shall not pass this way again.
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i was asleep in a world rushing past me in a fury haze not taking in what it is that my life is about what is my life about? why am i who i am? there must be a reason behind it all i want to use what i have for the greater good of all those i cherish the people who have moulded me into who i am the process has been a timely one finally my eyes have been opened the shadow of my own disbelief has been removed im going to do what i can, when i can for the better of my fellow friends i want to gi...
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we take for granted every day what we have the air we breath the people in our lives the beauty we are surrounded by i want you to stop and clear your mind of all concious thought listen to the birds in the trees feel the grass under your fingertips listen to the soft sound of a waterfall watch the sunset listen to the sound of the ocean lapping against the shore absorb the energy nature has to give we often let the smallest things pass us by take the time to do this sometimes the smallest th...
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