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AGE: 23
LOC: Clovis, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 08

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Flash Fiction / .hamburg
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I .from here, vision set east towards archaic brick, a brilliant wall of electric patterns crackled in cold european night. it was here that he received the postcard, under electric castles. .and now, a gloved hand signals an approaching taxi, yellowed body reflected on a London thoroughfare, dim crowds of shadowed suits bathed in headlights. .inside, blonde leather .aged english, vocals lax from smoking. he wore a hat, dark shape covering a tuff of light grey. "where to, mate?" "station." an...
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Flash Fiction / .spade
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IV ,and from here, position fixed the city was lit a magnificent tone of electric white, colors fallin' across a black bay. .it was under those chromatic giants that spade formed existence, molded from inquiring minds. .eastside .the norman fiest building loose old concrete early 20s .endless, a constant stream filling a sagging doorway, old maple hinged with pittsburg brass. it was though this medium, this old yellowed office, that spade operated, shuttered by years of clipped headlines and ...
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I will leave the reviewing of stuffy things like grammar and punctuation to that of lofty beings. I will review the content. Nothing more than amazing. From what I take from it, at times, I feel this way about mostly faith in christianity, for I feel the pain that theyre going through. I love this. Thank you so much for writing this
Poetry / Happiness
lovely! this is a great piece about an emotion that is very universal yet so personal. kudos to you, mother. i gave u a 10 on a book of your own because well, its your book, so therefore, it rocks! but if it was a book to be sold on the open market, at like barnes and noble, then i dunno but its a great piece!
Poetry / Shades of time
i found the actual writing good but hard for me to understand. were you writing about a girl or love or hate? perhaps perceptions of a windy river or an old cabin meadow? where exactly is this set? it seems you miss someone hmm when you asked for elaboration, what were u looking for exactly?
Novel Treatments / Ashley Burlough
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / This is Not For Me- Rant
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