fairie_form's profile

fairie_form avatar
AGE: 40
LOC: Tulsa, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 24

I have never shared my writing with anyone before now. This is a new experience for me. I am also writing a book…maybe I will submit some of it’s content as a short story.

Item Stats
Reviewer Stats
Items
Poetry / untitled
Version 1
4 Reviews   0 Comments
Thoughts race, my heart aches, Confusion sets in. My life on a tight wire... Balancing precariously the slightest breeze Can make my confidence Shatter. In myself, in my lover. Worming doubt infests my soul... Can I be strong, sure? Webs of undisclosed reality Close in. My path forks in all directions Although I can only chose one, My vision is blurred with fear I grope for clues. Misguided by the creative visualization Called hope Blinded by dreams unrealistic Letting the wind carry me To an...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
5 Reviews   0 Comments
in sublime simplicity her form a perfect balance; (delicate petals) rest atop graceful stalks deeply rooted to Mother Earth. her beauty is constant and eternal as the season's cycle; (radiant) forever blanketing the prairie of my heart with serene summer colors. with each passing year i anticipate watching her bloom; (open) her vibrance continually filling my soul with song and promise. oh, how i yearn to rest myself amongst her many blooms; (envelop myself) deeply inhaling her refreshing hon...
Ratings & Rankings
Poetry / may
Version 1
4 Reviews   2 Comments
the comfortable softness and erotic beauty of our combined scent haunts me... this luscious and heady bouquet mingles delicately released as our full and exotic blooms passionately caress together each luxurious sensation inviting blissful ecstacy to breeze rythmically over our flower covered bed... thus, creating an eternal spring in which our love will always grow.
Ratings & Rankings
Reviews
Poetry / Child's Wisdom
I like your use of descriptive words...but, I had a hard time with the rhythm. I like the sentiment that life is infused with creative energy during childhood, and that as the child matures they must fight to keep it. This is a good poem. I wasn't sure about this line: to a time that never ways.
Poetry / untitled
I really like the disjointed imagery that flows like...well, juice! Great work. I do look foward to reading more of your words. :)
very earthy...and nostalgic. I could easily perceive the relationship that had been forged over time with his mare, and the man's solitude. The numbing pain of loneliness. Well written, I only feel that the last line is uncertain and stiff.
Locked
Children's / The Valley of Flowers
I think it is a beautiful story. I love all the flowers...the imagery is wonderful. With a little more fine tuning on punctuation it will be perfect. You are on your way to being a great writer! Keep up the good work...I cant wait to read another story from you...or maybe a poem... ;)