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Are you worried your Real Estate Agent isn't marketing your property properly in this modern era? You may be right. With the Internet Age upon us, well over 80% of today's property buyers choosing to search on the Internet to find their new homes, and they are judging your property's worth in seconds, according to a teeny-tiny picture of your house. Back in the old days, it was the agent who decided what you would see, and you piled in the car and went from house to house. Those...
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I like it overall, but it seemed to be speaking of agoraphobia, and then it got philosphical at then end, and it didn't seem to add up. So perhaps I missed the point, I fear. I think the last line is important to you, but it doesn't seem to fit within this poem. ~feature this...
I thought it was pretty good, until the last two lines. I think they could have more impact if they were re-worded to have more rhythm. It's a bit too sticky. But other than that, you have a great point and I think you should send it! ~feature this...
I like it. You didn,t need to use very many words to get the jist of the events across. Kinda creepy wat to start a fire.I especially love the title that goes with it. ~Michelle
Very nice... I loved the imagery and the way your words really captured both that child-like glee and the adult excitement, and even the reverence for the season. I think could be a very well-rounded Christmas song I'd relate to and want to hear every year, but hey, I love Christmas songs like redenecks love buffet restaurants. ~featurethis
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