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AGE: 40
LAST LOGIN: July 16

Almost 40, pagan, poet, podcaster, persnickety, kind of likes “p” words.

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Some words are so like hyacinth, like blooming magnolia that I can grieve their loss can hover and buzz confused as bees who find sugar water where lilacs should live. Bees don't linger long. I've watched the impossible hover, that bumbling mid-flight change in direction. I've taken lessons, and if the scent of promise, or a contract of blooms led me wrong, well, I grieve, yes, but I fly on.
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Poetry / Hands
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I I wrote once of hands, compared them to fine-boned birds. I wanted them on these hips feather light, then coming down, home to roost. I wanted them not knowing they were better for clinging for plucking, for taking, for chiseling at what was already winged and in flight. II The first hands I knew were like weather. A flurry, then a stillness, then a storm. III Hands now are neither birds or weather. They are not potter's hands, do not think clay when blood and muscle meet their touch. They ...
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Poetry / Marshal Law
This is seriously lacking in stanzas. Otherwise, the imagery is good.
Poetry / Ex O Ex
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Flash Fiction / Downfall
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25.0% Review Quality (4 Votes)
Flash Fiction / Worship
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Haiku/Senryu / The Writer's Cycle
I LOVE this. I love the descriptive use of language, and the format itself. This is lovely. "Night brings new thought/and your brain switches back on/ ... I know this feeling intimately.
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