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LOC: New Orleans, LA
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What is a heart without feeling no emotions, no cares No misery No where to turn The whole world's aginst you Atleast that's what you think Get down on yourself, then it's drink after drink Blink after blink still nothings changed Wonder why your life so bad, then ask yourself man How could you hate the people who loved you so much Burn your bridges, break all ties, things of that such Last chances given time after time Til' there's no more No windows, no doors No escape route from the down p...
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Poetry / How far
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How far will you go to be loved Sometimes I think I will die for her affection Just a touch from her soft hands And I get an instant errection My heart belongs to her, mind, body, and soul Afraid to share my entire past Don't think she will love me as a whole So to avoid conflict, there are somethings I just won't say But if asked I won't lie Just tell her the pure truth and pray That our love strong enough to battle the storms So at the end of arguing she is back in my arms Can't call it fro...
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Poetry / My Angel
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Your my angel, My guidance in dark The fire extinguisher for that certain spark The humorous joke that I never told That body heat I long for when I'm shivering cold A wonderful lover for the things you do Like Usher and Alicia Keys, said "You are my boo" Can't explain to you exactly how I feel But after listening to K-Ci and JoJo, I know that it's real My heart beats different upon the sight of you Two thumps and a long pause as you walk through Your as beautiful as life itself Beautiful bro...
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Poetry / For Reasons
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For reasons I could never explain The thought of being without you seems to rattle my brain Test my nerves, grip my heart in a way never before Moments like these are rare It's 1 of every million who believes in love at first sight So at first sight I daydream of a future together A perfect life secluded Islands where there's beautiful weather Caterin to you is my passion until death do us part So at this very moment while I'm speakin "Can I Have Your Heart?" Not just for the moment, But fore...
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Bless thee the annointed one who does God work Shame on thee who looks and still put themselves first Evil hearts tainted souls rule our world What ever happened to the little innosence we possessed as young boys and girls In this life Catholics are the biggest sinners in disguise Homosexual priests bringing our belief in Jesus to its demise So I ask "What's really our purpose in this creul land?" Worst case scenarios and even the president won't lend a helping hand To the thousands who suffe...
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Haiku/Senryu / second haiku
This poem is so short but said so much. This poem can be taken and depicted so many ways and turned to make it someone's own. Initially I would think this poem is about a prostitute. It can be about any care giver though. It just says the person that is giving away their love doesn't have no love left for themselves. Or it can be a child telling their mom that or a husband telling his wife or vice versa. It is very interesting and gives alot (even in so little words)for debate. Once again I r...
This poem is kinda hard to understand for me. I really didn't get much from it but I think it is about a girl falling for someone who promises alot of priceless things desired, but only receives money to gamble with. I am not sure how you intended this poem to be viewed but that's how I took it.
Poetry / Turned
I am not exactly sure how you would want people to take this poem. To me it seems like you are portraying a person who tries to change his or her life, but goes from crack or other drugs to drinking. The drinking then kills him. It seems like when he dieds he really doesn't know who he is anymore. I am sure a lot of people can relate to this poem. Good job on the small imagery used, even though it wasn't really in depth I was able to visualize your character.
Poetry / Headed South
I like this poem alot. It doesn't really go into depth on any topic but basically you give like an overview of things that has happened up until now. I am not sure why you would emphasis CAN and not the whole last sentence. I guess you have your own reason so it's cool...but once again I enjoyed reading your poem.
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