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AGE: 30
LOC: Portland, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 18

Fern Capella is a singer/songwriter/poet currently hibernating in Portland, OR. She graduated with her B.A. in Experimental Performance from San Francisco’s Experimental Performance Institute in 2004, and has spent the past two years in SF honing those skills. She is a proud mother of one lovely 6 yr old boy,Sage.
Check her out at myspace.com/ferncapella.

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Poetry / 6 words.
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Notice: dirt bag boyfriend, free stuff!
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Poetry / 6 words.
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Please, baby, she's just a friend!
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Poetry / 6 words.
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In life but not in love.
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Poetry / 6 words.
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Two is not more than one.
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Poetry / 6 words.
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A kiss won't make it better.
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Hi, Thank you for sharing your work with us. The ideas I want to stress in terms of revision are "be specific" and "tempo." I would also like to encourage revision of the first half almost entirely cut out and you, the poet, begin to pick up the thread that began to emerge during the second half of your piece. That often happens in poems, we start to discover why we sat down to write halfway through writing, but then the first words need to be sacrificed to make way for the completeness of th...
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