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As it goes for publishing, there are several grammatical errors to correct before this could be published. "The high chair was not quiet close..." - change 'quiet' to 'quite' "As she reached out to get the glass, her arms not long enough to grab it. She knocked the glass over." - This should be one sentence, or the first part needs to be reworked so that it is not a fragment. "Living in what I called “The Sticks.” With no way to the hospital. I was worried about infection and I knew all I had...