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AGE: 17
LOC: Malaysia
GEN: Female
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Poetry / Tending wounds
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Once a time I came back home, Sad and solemn in the soul. Wounded and raged I fled real wild, Upsetting stuff, Shouted and howled. You came down from the stairs, Shocked and concerned, You said: “what’s the matter?” Without hesitation, I broke into tears, Letting out secrets. Bits of sadness, Pieces of anger, Debris of betrayal, And heartbreaking stories. Your tears rolled down, Sharing my burden, Never leaving me, Alone in darkness. Your fingers soothed me, Your lips stopped my anxiety, Whi...
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Poetry / May
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Mom, What happened to May, She sits there alone, For many a day, Sighing: “it began to roll” Mom, Why is May’s tummy big? Has she eaten like a pig? she told me its not, But her tummy is as big as a pot! Mom, Why do you argue with May? I do not understand. May said she’s going to take care of him, But what does it mean? Mom, Why is May’s bed empty? There’s naught on her shelf but an old, worn sock, The top of her mantelpiece was swept clean, Where does her money box used to be? Mom, Why do you...
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In midst of the skies, Let the fire sparks fly, Allow the woods to be burned, Let the evil hearts die. Make their bones on fire, Make their flesh go rotting, Until the Day of Judgment, There’ll be naught but sufferings. For the hearts of justice, For their flesh and soul, We cry their bravery, For vanquishing the devil. In the lanes and paths, On the streets and roads, We shout at our will, For the hearts of justice. In their name we’ll cry, The devil will die, The innocent roam free, Under t...
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Intro Kuala Lumpur is the capital of Malaysia, and it is the most bustling place in the whole country. A cool breeze swept passed me as I woke up from bed. Today was Saturday, a day for relaxation and fun. So here I am, enjoying the cheerful chirping of birds as I tidy up my bed and prepare for a new day. After getting ready, I went to the kitchen to help mom lay the breakfast. The tempting fragrance of ‘nasi lemak’(rice cooked with coconut oil) with ‘sambal’(spicy sauce to eat with nasi lema...
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Haiku/Senryu / Machine Gunsaku
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Poetry / "Rest"
good and nice. i love it! well, i find it hard to give some comments....but its really nice, i tell you.
Quotes / The broken path
excellent. but, the title doesnt suit it a lot,in my opinion. the quote is about peace, but the title is borken path. but, i didnt mean to be critic, and i really like it. good job, and write on!
Poetry / Wait
its excellent and i love it, but the vulgar language spoiled it a lot. i love the ryhme, truly. write on!
Poetry / .ghost.
Excellent! Well done! great poem, it is. well-written, and the it has the ability to blend the reader into the story, in the midst of the how the character feels. great job! write on!
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