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LOC: Portland, OR
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Your every day removed from me, this peace of mine does grow. There's nothing you can do to me, and it's freeing just to know though you are gone but not forgotten, that forgetting just takes time, but your being gone is permanent, so my tomorrows will be mine.
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I'll admit I have far less idea as to what is going on in this review than if I was actually reading the back cover of a book, but I'll nonetheless point out to you the two things that first struck me as somewhat disconcerting: The "ants in their pants" line is just cliché enough to make me lose a little interest in the story. I like the Newton reference - it definitely piqued my interest - but the last sentence could really hone that interest better than it does. Just my two cents.
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