I'll admit I have far less idea as to what is going on in this review than if I was actually reading the back cover of a book, but I'll nonetheless point out to you the two things that first struck me as somewhat disconcerting: The "ants in their pants" line is just cliché enough to make me lose a little interest in the story. I like the Newton reference - it definitely piqued my interest - but the last sentence could really hone that interest better than it does. Just my two cents.