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AGE: 16
LOC: Bishopville, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 05

Um… I sit in my room, listening to music while I write and read. I’m obsessed with the Jonas Brothers, Nick in particular. (As my pic shows). All my work comes from my subconcous mind and dreams.So… whatever.

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Short Story / My Life
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My life: hectic, creative, boring, exciting.
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Poetry / Stressed
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It’s becoming to much pressure I can’t even begin to measure Oh, please tell me, really honey How in the world is this funny? You think it’s called being sly I call it walking out, saying bye Why must I be there? All I want is to be here In this room with a bed Please, hit me on the head Don’t press, oh God, don’t press I’m already stressed My hair is falling out Can’t I pout? I’m being pressed, Becoming stressed.
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Poetry / Rock Star Life
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The roar is loud I feel so proud There’s a huge crowd Security’s tight, making sure everything’s just right People reach out More than I can count Rocking out, just for you Loving every minute ‘cause it’s what we do My brothers and I Until we die We joke and tease Only to please Felling good abut our show I smile and glow Not so many songs to go But you know… That’s just a day in the life
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Poetry / Forgotten
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Alone in a crowded room, running away from everything. Confronting everyone, sitting there. I look at your eyes, distant and foggy. I listen to your voice, directed away from me. I reach out grasping for your attention. You flinch away. Why do you look away? Why do you move, can’t I ask? You’ve become someone else, no one I know. I’m forgotten, gone from your mind. Wiped clean. You’ve moved away, far away. I’m backed into a corner. From all sides, blocked in. I AM FORGOTTEN.
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Poetry / Crashed
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Why do you say that, right there, standing on the mat? The suitcase, crammed full. I’ll drag and I’ll pull. To get away, far away, I’ll keep the emotions at bay. The blue lights flash, with the red, they clash The pavement is cold, Feeling out and bold. The pool of blood, It’s just like a flood. There are shadows all around. Far above, I must be on the ground The world is fading, fastly fading. It’s slowly cascading. Everything’s dark Avoiding the relief of stark Has it been said? Yes, I am d...
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Poetry / Winning memoir
I think this is very touching and that it goes deep to show that even if you do something that has an outcome that could be very stressing and you put in a lot of hard work, you can do anything. Keep up the good work!
Quotes / Six Words
This is very nice. I like it and I've reviewed it once before but with a different criteria. I like the way it is worded and goes deep. Keep up the great work.
Humor/Satire / 6 words
It is very deep and makes the reader think about it for a minute. I am glad that you chose me to review it and that I had the opportunity to read those six words.
That was very nice. It described how everyone wants their chance to be better and acknowledged for it. How everyone is different and it's a good thing. I liked it because it feels like what everyone says to me or my friends. It sends a very good message to the readers and is very outspoken. Very nice. Thanks for letting my read it. Flamebringer15
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Welcome...Not-Part 1
OMG! That was awesome. I loved it. Please tell me there is gonna be more. The plot was laid out very well. There just the right amount of description to keep the reader entertained, not too bogged down. Great job! I absolutely loved it! Keep up the great work and keep writing. You never know what it will do for you in the long run. Flamebringer15
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