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AGE: 20
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 15

I am a content guy. I am in love which keeps me happy in an otherwise average life. Frustration in job, prospects etc. runs wild throughout my life. Contention overshadows my dreams. To the extent that i don’t know what my dreams are anymore. I love a girl named Laura, as i mentioned, she keeps me happy by just being around. Thats me.

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It's hard to be decisive with your head up in the clouds, It's harder to be happy with your feet on the ground, It's hard to be anything when it all gets you down, Passion is in fashion. I want to be impulsive and never need a motive, I need to be a hero to those who are hopeless, I cannot be anything when it all gets you down, Passion is in fashion. I am so old-fashioned with all of my morales, I am so discouraged with all of our quarrels, I can always be something when you put me down, Pass...
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Version 1
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Won't tell you what I saw, Cos you'll need to settle the score, I'm so sorry, if you worry, But you know I'm in a hurry, And you'll be left wanting more. I can take you where I hide, But you'll have to wait outside, It's my secret, and I'll keep it, 'Cos i know I'll always need it, For days when our ego's collide. Now welcome to my dreams, Where I have different themes, Some are sad, some are mad, Some are what I never had, None become true it seems. So now I understand, Life isn't how I plan...
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Poetry / Up This Life
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Its such a waste of taste, If you choose the suit-wearing, Over-bearing, Type of guy, As i'd like to buy, A day in the week, A week in the year, I'm weak enough to care, I'm a tortured soul, Stuck in the role, Of working class nobody, In a life thats so shoddy, That it's dropped of the scale, Of respect, its oh so frail. So like a thirsty fish, I drink to salvage my sanity, Or discourage my vanity, The world is mine and i am vain, I'm not crazy but God knows i'm not sane, I get up when i feel...
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Non-fiction / Chicano
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Horror / The swing
What happened April 8th? This piece sucks the reader in with force, although it does seem a bit all over the place to begin with, it does clarify things soon enough but leaving enough mystery to allow the reader to crave the next part of the story. It is hard to get to grips with the amount of characters but that is the only criticism and I expect that they will gradually be explained as the story goes on, so as long as that happens then I can see myself enjoying this story immensely. Please ...
Poetry / Adrift
A sense of isolation is acheived incredibly, I don't know what you're relations are with sailing etc but it helps heighten the loneliness in this poem. Overall a very good job. I enjoyed it alot.
Poetry / Prodical
Excellent. I feel bad about a one word review but there is nothing else i can say. Love the final line, of all the things going on, it is honesty that does it. It is a brilliantly worded and thought provoking piece that deserves alot of credit. Good job.
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