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AGE:
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LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 27
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 27
I’m a 20 year old junior in college…I just recently decided to change my major from english to early childhood education…..what can I say I love kids…....but I don’t have any of my own…....at least not yet…..I got a PASSION for writing…...I’ve had it for as long as I can remember…aside from teaching I wanna own m own magazine and possibly my own publishing company…..I’m focused man….
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cut them off, they're telling me to cut them off....but there's no switch for my feelings...... no click, click do away with your feelings.......I'm *cough* *sneeze* sick of these feelings.......I'm in pain like fingers pinch cause of feeling......drunk like two shots of henn that I'm feeling......seeking refuge & praying for healing.....knowing one day I'll lose this feeling
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how do i explain/ this hollow feeling overtaking the space where my heart once rested/ never thought I'd feel such pain my trust and my love was in vain/ such a poor investment/ what i thought i felt i guess i didnt feel/ but oh how it felt so real/ the way my body shivered/ when you delivered/ my every hearts desire/ u set my soul on fire/ or was it just my imagination/ that had my tracing hearts around our name/ wishing your love would never change/ and here i am again back where i started/...
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masked behind this smile/ lies a broken child/ beat down by society/ disowned byhis community his only refuge is poetry/ its a hard knock life and there ain't no love in the heart of the city/so he looks to me/ yearns for me to be/ his everything/ and so with my blank pages Ilove him tenderly/ love when his pen is stroking me/ I allow myself to be the canvas for his masterpiece/ engorge myself with happiness when he smiles at me/ u see/ we've become each others everything/ this is no infatuat...
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after years of oppression/ I'm guessin/ ure still clueless to the fact that through my womb I bore life/ created the whole world in the blink of an eye/ yet I/ am constantly beaten and abused/ you my son have life and love miscinstrued/ verbally you attack me with usage of words that peirce my inner coer/ physically you use me as your personal whore/ and when ure through with me you throw me to the side/ and the pain i hide/ pick up the pieces and keep movin/ keep doin/ and acting/ like nothi...
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dipped in hues/ of blacks and blues/ my canvas speaks of sorrow/ depicts frustration/ and desperation/ searching for a better tomorrow
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I really enjoyed your blog. Somehow you were able to make others relate to exactly how you were felling. It seems at though you were engaging in a conversation with yourself. Reassuring yourself that all that you've been through thus far were just tiny milestones and you seem to be prepared for hat is to come. As a 21 year old young woman I have yet to fully understand just what love really is. I also havent fully prepared myself for the heartbreaks that have come my way but I can say with ea...
I enjoyed this piece very much....your use of adjectives paints a very detailed picture and allows the reader to visualize the loationa...and the conversation and descriptions of the characters truly makes them come to life
I loved it....your use of descriptive words painted a visual picture which allows the reader to see what you were talking about...it made the piece come alive....its so crazy how without thinking we assume things about people before getting to know them...and after giving them a chance you gaina new appreciation for them..great job
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That is so true...I like the fact that it so simply put but has such a deep meaning...great work
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