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AGE:
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LOC: Fraser, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 13
LOC: Fraser, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 13
Well, let me start by saying that I am propbably one of the most real people you could ever hope to cross paths with. I am brutally honest, which has proven to be both a blessing and a curse. I aim to lead a very righteous existence, but am at times pointed in the wrong direction, as are we all…I believe: that a certain level of insanity is required in a person in order to keep from going completely over the edge to the piont of no return, that people are supposed to be messed up… it’s those “normal” ones we should really be watching out for, that the truth is the greatest weapon you can bring to a battle; it cuts deeper than any knife, that we are all part of a whole and what you put in is what you get back.
I have been writing poe…
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Well, Sweet Heart I'll have you know You bring out the best in me You keep me right on top of my game Right where I need to be You manage to make me want to stay Yet still make me feel free I cannot give you thanks enough For letting me be me Or explain the way I feel Awakening with you to see I know we've both been hurt before I share your empathy One day, the Lord will show us what for When we find our destiny I feel, you stimulate my mind Which means a lot to me Something I can rarely find...
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You make me crazy But I love you anyway I hardly see you Yet you stay on my mind You leave me confused But I haven't given up I just hope you know that I care Even all the times when you're not there With heart and soul I still hold on But I'm not psychic So tell me if I'm wrong You need your space As much as I need mine And all wounds heal If given enough time I like you I love you I think you're a blast I just hope that we can find each other Before our time has passed.
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Will I miss you when you're gone? What will you look like when you're 1? Will you be a boy or girl? Should I bring you into this world? With golden hair and emerald eyes, is your creation even wise? Unfair to me, as well to you, could we make it? Just us 2? Daddy's gone now, from my heart Left bruises, tears, and broken hearts Afraid to end up like my mother Considering our meeting of eachother With God as my witness, forsaking my pride, which road do I take, when there's nowhere to hide?
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So I Turned around and Realized what was Expected of me, Never forgetting that God does Things for a reason. He is with me.
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You can't tell by the noose in the corner Because it didn't work when I tried to end the horror The razors in the bathroom don't mean a thing Because all they do is leave scars and sting All the bottles of pills have no consequence Because habitual use has left a tolerance The more I sit and contemlate It seems that no one will ever relate Day by day, I lose my mind Yet all I say is "I'm fine" I think about the trigger and pull it But of course, I haven't any bullets I just want to get rid of...
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i love this one! i especially enjoy how it turns in just a few lines from high and mighty to humble. something we all need from time to time. i felt a loss of flow where you hyphenated, but it still goes with everything. over all very good!
this piece makes me think of human nature. we always know that we will have to pay the consequences for our actions, but we can't resist, we what what we can't have, even it means trouble. i am not fluent enough on the proper protocol for haikus, so i am no help there, but that aside, i like this piece. it is simple and to the point, yet can mean anything, all at the same time.
I really like this one. I enjoy going through the story, and seeing how the different stages affect your feelings. The thought processes revealed are a nice touch as well. The inner conflict of good vs evil, ending with you being the bigger person. I believe that it is in those details, those feelings, that make this piece relative to not only someone who is going through a similar situation, but also to someone going through a large variety of other situations. Those feelings apply to many o...
well, i fall some where between the other two folks. i agree that the words are quite emotionally powerful, but i also agree that i didn't really feel the lyrical ring previously referred to either. but lyrics are, well, lyrics, and forever incomplete without the music intended to accompany them. i would be interested in actually hearing how you put it all together. often the music can either make, or break, a song.
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