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AGE: 27
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 20

I’ve recently been drawn to poetry again by reading some really emotional writings in online chat. This one girl puts everything out there, with great courage. I’m working my way to that goal.

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Poetry / THis Spirit
Version 2
20 Reviews   3 Comments
Rigid he sits before a dilemma, Something in him snaps, he fights the tremor. Shaking free he can’t face reality, he leans back, breaths deep, he wants to be free. FREE he thinks, and one great exhalation, A wisp…. A puff…. like condensation. The spirit dances, freed by ablation, Free from flesh, a self emancipation. Soaring,YEehaa! tearful jubilee, now I’ll take pleasure in just being me. I’ll spend time with friends and family, enjoy life, love its my destiny. Now it visits friends family a...
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Poetry / Joker
Version 1
3 Reviews   0 Comments
Joker A massive passage slowly traveled, Tired soul with no food! Baffled. A massive building, glass walled glamour. There’s Tinsel? For all it enamours. Sitting at a meticulous setting, Austere behavior mixed with betting. Though betting with no winners ransom, Millions and more let this entertain them! Some say skill, tricks and presence of mind. I say luck, a toss, leave your wits behind. This order and custom a pretense, Boredom warded off by cheap suspense. You take the stage for moments...
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Version 4
2 Reviews   0 Comments
In no one could I confide, in bed I could not hide. Morning and all day I boiled. Under iron self control I toiled. Moving calmly against drives of anger, Every relative looked a stranger. I was ten today, what a charade. What no bike! I shouldn’t have stayed An ANT FARM! what had they reasoned That I wouldn’t think this, TREASON. All day I expected, a “SURPRISE”! was it a joke gift, with horrible lies? But It started to dawn at dusk, They couldn’t afford it we were bust. “We need to save for...
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Poetry / Focus
Version 4
3 Reviews   0 Comments
I mustn’t look away If my attention strays Some momentous event might change life as I know it. Sensual treats, sight and sound, Distracting marvels all around. But I fear they’ll distract me, You know nothings had for free. “My sullen friend! come with me, today we find ribaldry. ,,,,,,, For you work so intently, Don't act so defensively“ To partake of your excursion Will cause my dreams dispersion. I cannot miss a moment, Though my life gives great torment. “Blunders affect more gently Thos...
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Poetry / I ask
Version 1
3 Reviews   1 Comment
I ask Peek through, I ask, the drapes of fear, Your pattering heart; I'll hold dear. If I startle please don't take fright. Enchanted I stare at your eyes, so bright. A beginning awash with emotion, Cares dissolve in a lovers emersion. It could be surprising it could be fun. With our souls completion our work is done.
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Delilah-Part 9 w/recap
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Quotes / Once Is Enough
good in that it shows through one experience you learn. I would like to know what you experienced. It is a good title considering its a one liner.
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Poetry / Humor
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Poetry / Campus Life
brings memories of university back to life. A good nostalgic poem. great