I'm usually a fan of "take a step back and look around you" quotes, but I can't say I really see much meaning in this tidbit. Maybe it could use some clarity. If this is about being angry with someone, I'm not sure I understand. If you're asking why people put it on themselves to survive when they are, in actuality, vulnerable while alone, you might want to flesh out the idea of fragility and aloneness/naive independence. If, instead, you're talking about the physical death of bodily cells as...

Perhaps it's not the best idea to live as if the entire world wanted nothing more than to ruin your chance at that cookie. Be that as it may, sometimes everyone wants that cookie. I like the way you put this, but you may want to change one word, if only for those fatally-allergic-to-peanuts. After all, for them, the quote takes on a new and morbid meaning.

I understand that you're going for allusion, but with poetry, you can't get by sounding too cliché. Phrases like "songs of the birds", "cry of hte wolves" and "forest of the night" don't do much for your originality points. Maybe work with the poem a bit, trim it down, twist some words. I think you'll find that your concept comes across with a lot more umph.

At least for me, this haiku invoked imagery quite beautifully. I'm not sure what the standard is for haikus, but you may want to expand on this to get to your point about passing strangers. One stanza more would probably do it, but that may just be my opinion. A small note: 'pain' should be 'pane', but I'm sure that's just a typo. Good job, keep up the good work.

I like it; it has umph to it. You might want to consider, though, that the fundamental forces are kindof a "black box" and, so far, are quasi-"supernatural" themselves.