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LOC: Wyoming, MI
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LAST LOGIN: September 19
LOC: Wyoming, MI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 19
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Quit day job; twelve years premature.
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Quit day job. Twelve years prematurely.
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“Here we are, you sure you're ready?” Cliff looked over at his nephew before climbing out of the small Toyota pick-up truck, which liked to shake and burp as the engine shut off. Terry let the truck complete its death rattle in the driveway before climbing out. The hot morning breeze lifted his dingy mullet. He grabbed a pair of dark sunglasses from the collar of his stained t-shirt and placed them over his eyes. He took a moment to examine the home in front of him. The small A-frame house s...
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Chapter One: June, 7th, 4:43p.m. Friday 2008 Alex Cutler's dark eyes were focused on a thin monitor; black hair hung to his chin along the sides of his face. His tall frame gently rocked back and forth as his lean fingers attacked the keyboard. His office was average in size, offering a fifth-floor view of neighboring parking lots and surrounding buildings in downtown Chicago, and bare of everything except a pair of padded chrome chairs and an all-glass desk. A box set to the side contained t...
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Its easy to tell you have good experience. This just reads easy. Is it a collection of small stories like these? I would think that could work if there was a central connection. Im assuming these are all true, which earns bonus points frome me. And I wish we would of knew how hot the chick was who had the tattoo. big diff between whether id like to do her or not. kind of important. good luck
Wonderful. First line made me laugh. I belike a few weeks ago I read a previous version of this. I must say this one towers over the old. well done. Can only give 8 because of length. so far so good
not sure why you didnt capitalize your 'i''s I liked the story I think the wording was too peotic for my taste. it is good as is but to make it more a story alot needs to be reworded so it flows better.
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