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AGE: 19
LOC: Boynton Beach, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 24

i’m not your average girl – although you may think me average just for saying it
heart doesn’t beat the way it used to
children amaze me – they have no intentions to screw you over – yet we call them immature
has been living life sine 1989 – but only now am i liking it
in love – he makes me smile – even when he’s not around
raised myself – unless you count the meals and clothes – but morals, ideas, and prorities – all me
life blinks – if u understand that then u understand me
big dreams – little time—no money – still pursuing
refuse to loose myself as i am drowning in the false intentions of those that surround me
the names Jhnelle
but u can call me Rocsi
kisses

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Poetry / my walk
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i take a stroll outside my hometown n look around as my city sits under this depressing cloud its been years but issues continue to mound we're loosin todays kids before yesterdays are found and as the anguish compunds from the hurt that surrounds i pray that tomorows voices will bear better sounds cuz i'm sick of my men droppin cuz of these females that be trippin they be purposely cheatin knowin damn well lifes clock is tickin they be sleepin at night when its TWO niggas they be fuckin b...
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Poetry / free me
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so i sit here writing with paper and pen and i’m thinking i can’t see how this will end cuz you don’t see what i see when i look at me standing here looking in the mirror at this face this reflection thats supposed to be myself and i try my best to see a girl with the smiles and giggles that used to echo in this world but i only hear the small slow thumps of a heartbeat thats scared shitless at this life she’s created for herself so i stare and b...
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Poetry / days before now
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its been 18 yrs n 10 months n i aint been loved so you comin my way just leaves me stuck in the days when daddy considered me his girl i would sit back and dream up a world in where i find a shield to protect me from pain and i'd replay our love in my head over n over again i'd kiss him, he'd hold me, we'd make love he'd make me laugh, and dry my eyes - man all the stuff he'd hold my hand and walk me thru this thing called life thats so hard to do he'd push me to excel in whatever what was...
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Poetry / SNAP!!
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i have been dealt one hell of a hand so i SNAP! for the pain that's guaranteed to come again i've seen rape, murder, and suicide so i SNAP! as i push my feelings aside i have seen little girls open legs to gain approval from men so i SNAP! and lend my hand i've been used abused lied to and mistreaten so i SNAP! fo rmy hopes of happiness desires and longing i SNAP! as i cry alone in my room i SNAP! cuz the end isnt soon i SNAP! to applaud myself i SNAP! cuz my all isnt my best i turn around fo...
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Poetry / once again
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poems used to flow so easily for me now i cant get what i feel into what i see i want to write about how much i love you but there stupid artists keep coming out with songs to impress the ones the love . . . . the rhyming of words dont even come naturally buggin my brain too casually let the words flow gracefully from my pen but then i hit constant walls people puting my words into a song feelings i knew i had all along but refused to come out in a poem for me to read to em everybody that onc...
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Quotes / Six word memoir
by neoprose
surprised that you dont think its much. i would love to hear some of your material that you think IS much. i think it captures something that writers look for every so often , a couple words to explain themselves. this quote catches that. if you do not think it is much then play with it until it is what you want it to be, then message me the outcome, i would love to hear it. amazing quote to me
Quotes / Dreamers
by lauthiamkok
so i had to read the quote over about 4 times. i do like how you used DREAM as a "base" word, if you will, repetitively. it adds to the whole thought provoking thing. i think i understand the quote, kinda like someone always has it worse than you --- but instead someone is always dreaming of what you have, and your always dreaming about what the next man has. IF i got this correct, the clarity is amazing and i completely agree. i think that it kinda says that you have to be grateful for what ...
Quotes / violent lines.
by Gavinswar
i have read these quotes before, so i hope it is by the same user on this site. if it is then i am glad to know that all these quotes lie in a novel, i would LOVE to read it -- so when it is ready PLEASE send me a message. again , overall your quotes are BRILLIANT!! the way they catch humor but still remain as serious as they should be, absolutely brilliant
Quotes / six word
by vickiebellew
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Quotes / Six-Word Memoir
by qurratulain
this i love. i have been reading these 6 word quotes for about 2 hours now. yours i must say cathces me. if i were flipping through a magazine and saw this quote i would instantly reach for my phone and write it down. i only know how to accelerate . . . it is every GO GETTER attitude type persons life saying. i'm over here and just amazed that it cathes everything. am definitely going to look through your other pieces. i want to know what the other 22 sounded like :) great great great work jm
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