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AGE: 15
LOC: Corpus Christi, TX
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Poetry / Virus
Version 1
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I can't believe I'm so contaminated To those who don't know, that means I'm sick How could you treat me so Malevolently? To those same people: it means like shit I've contracted a virus Now I don't know what to do I looked around for how I got it And all I could find is you Are you proud of your contagious illness? Does my sickness make you proud? Do you like my deadened stillness? Do you hear me screaming loud? I've contracted a virus Now I don't know what to do I looked around for how I got...
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Poetry / My Everything
Version 1
2 Reviews   1 Comment
It follows me wherever I go It tells me all I need to know It makes all the silence speak It's the reason my secrets leak It is the lie that I fell for It is all in me and more It's the only thing I need It's the strongest hidden greed It makes the path clear It draws all my enemies near It pry's my hands into the wall It's the only reason I do not fall It lifts my feet when I try to walk It conceals me when it makes me stalk It makes me go out at dark It makes my bite worse than my bark It m...
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Non-fiction / Six- Word Memoir
Amen to that my friend, Amen to that.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Poetry / The Walk Of Life
it's not bad, but not good either, I Do like the message, but with only four lines, you need to over-exaturate to a level where you need not say more. keep up the work though
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Prologue to "Heart of a Satyr"
this is realy good, if you wrote a book, I would read it. I like the detail alot, it's not realy easy to find writers that can paint a picture in your head anymore. Very glad you didn't say "he saw a troll, waited for his chance, then slayed it..." kept my attention and I say if you write a book, just watch out for the introduction, that detail can bore someone when describing people. if you have a mysterious protagionist then your story would be a surefire contender for best Science Fiction....
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