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AGE: 19
LOC: Harrisville, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 31

I can’t write worth crap sometimes… I have more written of the story, but I’m having problems finding the motivation to finish it. It’s better though. Every time I re-write it, it gets better. At least, that’s what I hope for.

I am non-human, from the Lagoon Nebula in Sagittarius. I am an Interpreter of Fantasies and Dreams, as well as a Dreamer. I also have a Myspace account, (through which I found this) at mysopace/catfish369, if you wish to see more of my whacked-ness and random thoughts. Mail me for my MSN, Yahoo, AIM, or ICQ. Don’t ask why I have so many. It’s a long story.

I haven’t been on for a long time, but I’m starting another creative kick, so maybe I’ll be on here more often once again…

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Chapter I She is a consort to a God And a rather blind God at that He doesn’t see her ------ (Or the reason she’s there) Only her practical advice The God chases others With less wit and more Flirt, better for everything Other than having peace He then turns to his consort The last constant in his world For council in his courtly affairs But he doesn’t see her other than She has no identity other than The wise Dragon Keeper He enters her garden, sits Within the privacy of her world He tells h...

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I looked deep into his eyes, admiring their dark brown color. I felt his hand pushing the hair that was in my face behind my ear just before those awesome eyes closed and his lips softly touched mine. Then… I woke up. I was really in 10 History Level 2, zoning out as usual. I looked around quickly, wondering if anybody saw the goofy look on my face I probably had. I relaxed, noting that nobody was looking at me oddly, and slouched in my chair. The teacher was talking about World War I, just a...

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She is a consort to a God And a rather blind God at that He doesn’t see her beauty Only her practical advice The God chases others With less wit and more Flirt, better for everything Other than having peace He then turns to his consort For council in his courtly affairs But he doesn’t see her other than She has no other identity other than The wise Dragon Keeper His consort contemplates his troubles Within her green garden of herbs With candles and incense burning And she (with her dragon cur...

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Why am I hiding? Why do I run? God help this demented soul Bring to me the sun I walk the path to light As that is my calling Distractions all around me Adding to my stalling Avoiding eye contact Dying my hair What is it that I fear? When it isn't even there? What do I consider to be My definition and name? Based on who or what Isn't it all the same? Ironically my desire To increase creativity Never worked in shadows Not that I could see... Now that the sun is rising Calling me back to Life C...

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Tis but a day Nothing more nothing less Forgettting the past so bleak Looking towards a future bright Not the Amer'can dream I seek But another in my sight Time to escape a present dreary Forget the problems that we fight Time to wipe those eyes most bleary See the stars that guard the night Dreams that spiral round and round Changing, glowing brighter Now with color, better sound Flying higher, higher, higher Zoning out and back to Earth Listen to them drone! Tis my life to control I will fi...

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by casey_faded

The only problem I have is the line "my heart I lost." It throws it off, because it doesn't seem to be connected to anything else. Otherwise, the imagery is beautiful.

by skuborssy

Exactly. True that.

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by phlow

Wow, cool. Did you ever show it to her? Depression is a weird thing... But this seems to hit the question of those not depressed for those who are. All one can do is listen and support...

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