This paints a pretty clear picture. The beginning is so detailed I really was able to visualize everything, Beautiful vision until it turned 180 degrees to a jolting reality of continuing to love those that hurt us. This is my first review so I hope it is appropriate.

This definately speaks to me. I always want what I can't have. I guess you can never attain your imagination

This is pretty intense and deep, just my style. You don't reveal so much to give everything away but just enough to perceive through my own eyes. I wish this was longer so I could enjoy it even more.

I love this website. This poem is awesome. Its nice to see other people that think so deeply and intensely. I am loving trying to interperet this work. Great job

Very nice piece. Sometimes the past prevents us from moving forward. Good to see you can find inspiration from it, Keep it up.