gaiascully's profile
AGE:
23
LOC: Tucson, AZ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 03
LOC: Tucson, AZ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 03
I am 22 and I am an aspiring writer. I have been penning poetry for years now and it is a great way to express myself.
My hero is Suzanne Vega because her music is the reason I began to write in the first place.
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as the road winds further you may look back if you can but it gets harder to remember just where the road began I've turned so many pages in this story there are so many lessons I have learned and I don't quite remember how it started but I keep looking for meaning in the words as time moves ever forward and the days turn into years everything continues changing from our dreams to all our fears I've turned so many pages in this story there are so many lessons I have learned and I don't quite ...
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can you wake me from this daydream I think there's a world out there I keep waiting for it to find me cause I'm still here yes I'm still here I am looking for a way to find my place before I completely come undone I just want a chance to state my case before I'm forgotten all my time spent here in my mind working hard at getting nowhere I keep attempting to break free but I'm still here yes I'm still here I am looking for a way to find my place before I completely come undone I just want a ch...
Version 2
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where is my head I can not find it have you seen it around I feel lost without it I feel lost without it where is my confidence I don't know where it can be found I just can't live without it no I can't live without it (chorus) I don't want your sympathy anymore it makes me feel like a pity whore I don't need you to help me up if I fall I don't need to tell me it will be okay I can do this fine on my own just like I did yesterday I don't want you to feel sorry for me anymore it makes me feel ...
Version 1
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I look at the people but I do not see them I am somewhere in my head frozen in time I'm at the destination I don't know how I got here someone asks if I'm okay I answer "just fine" Its not me thats breaking at least I'm pretty sure I might be mistaken but this feels familiar I listen but I don't hear what you're saying somewhere music is playing and my hands, they are shaking but not from the cold you ask me why I am crying I feel my face is wet and I fall into your arms I let mysel...
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you take your blame I'll take mine and we can wear them like badges of honor and climb to the highest of mountain tops shouting a declaration of all we've done wrong ...then cut our losses and move on
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I like it. Very simple, yet it conveys so much. Some of the biggest truths in life are extremely contradictory and this seems to portray that fact.
That put an extremely funny image in my head. I really liked this one. Great rhyme and most importantly great punch-line.
Nice. Though I am not sure that "wahey" is a word, maybe it should be, because it fit well in the limerick. A bit raunchy but funny.
That was fun to read, it made me laugh. Cute theme, I thought it had a good rhyme and it made sense. Very fun.
I thought this was super cute. And unlike a lot of entries this is actually a limerick. Very appropriate for the season and very well done.
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