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LOC: Blacklick, OH
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LAST LOGIN: August 03
LOC: Blacklick, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 03
I’m just me, a writer with a computer and a lot of time on my hands and hopefully some talent…but either way writing is what I love to do the most above all other things. While I work third-shift in a molding plant I do some writing in my spare time.
And as far as writing stories goes. For me the most important thing when first writing the story is guess what…getting the story told. Grammar and spelling mistakes can be fixed once that’s been established…
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Legends Never Die By: Gary Fagan c) 2007 Edward Wei "Welcome to Moscow." the flight attendent's bored voice booms over the plan'es loudspeaker. "Where the local time is, 5:27 a.m., please enjoy your visit; thank you for flying Air Russe." Being the only passenger in my row; I wait on the mass exodus to thin out before getting up. Grabbing my backpack from the overhead I start walking towards the exit. After what seems like two hours; I am finally leaving the airport. My backpack tucked secur...
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After reading a blog of a friend of mine, and after many discussions with various people in person, I have come to the conclusion that its coming soon to the time that people will have to take a good hard look at two very important documents in American History. 1. The United States Constitution. 2. The Declaration of Independence. Lets first start with the Constitution of the United States. To begin with in the Bill of Rights, the first Amendment of the Bill of Rights even. Here let me put i...
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The Truth About Half-Demons (tentative title) By: GARY FAGAN Chapter 1 With my claws clicking in time to the overly loud second hand of old clock at the far end of the Lecture Hall style class, which is reading at a quarter past seven. I watch my fellow students and catch snippets of conversation with my extremely sensitive ears. My nose has long since adapted to the overdose of perfume, hair spray and various other products leaving scent tracers around the room, I’ve taken to just sort of gl...
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The Truth About Half-Demons (extra-info) Backstory for the world (plus a breakdown of the "food-chain" so to speak): This story is set in a world, nearly identical to our own. At least its history is the same except for one major difference. Magic, monsters and other beings are real and exist right alongside our modern technology. The big event that triggered this event occurred nearly forty years ago when the First portal opened in the scoreboard at Super Bowl III. Which as you can no doubt ...
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From the pages of The Paranormal: Vampyre (Reader Beware: Content may not be suitable for some re...
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From the pages of The Paranormal: Vampyre 1 Lust makes us mere mortals do some incredibly stupid things. I mean that if we were to examine the majority of our adult lives, we would find that most of our decisions were based on us gettin' some, or at least the hope of gettin' lucky. After all if we weren’t being tempted with some hard-bodied male, for the ladies, or a very voluptuous woman for the guys, we wouldn't have half the shit we do. Hell, we wouldn't do half the shit we do, if not for...
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I like the pentameter and slanted rhyme scheme that you've got set up with this poem. Even though poetry really isn't my thing as far as reading it is concerned you did an amazing job. and so I am giving you a 10 out of 10
Okay first there are just way too many grammatical errors in there for me to put down in this window to be worth sitting here pointing them out and would cost you way too many credits to find out what's wrong. I'm just going to go with the simplistic criticism in an effort to save you credits. Go back through the story with a fine-toothed comb when you get a chance and edit and refine the story. I am giving you a 5 out of 5 for this tale.
Over all the story was really well written and I can almost see what one of these "manics" look like and find tale to be quite original and can't wait to read more. the only problem that jumped out at me was... Ky was rite behind her with another hmm I don't think the correct spelling for the word "right" is "rite" but then again I could be mistaken... Just so you know though, that minor mistake did nothing to take away from an outstanding and well written story and so I'm giving it a 10 out ...
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This is one helluva free speach statement good work and put more of them out there lmao I'm giving this one a ten out of ten score just for you
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