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Legend of Lilith In the image of Him, He created in Eden Male and female, birthed the fifth day; Lilith of fire, Adam of soil and clay, Equal in thy own perfect garden Said He, to the first wife, Before the gift of Eve, ’I shall lay atop, let not, thy self deceive, Said She, ’I will not lay below, equal, we derive.’ O, to no end, the bickering Lilith, of hard-shed tears, she tired, The Ineffable Name spoken, splaying gates wide, Fled, did She, whilst evening ablaze of lightening Of ....Eden.....
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1st - i loved it! every character was LARGE and their back stories/ personal traits were descriptive and brought everything into vivid detail. "Minutes later, a tidal wave of spiritual energy crashed over him, but offered no respite from the blistering sun. Endorphins ran naked and unashamed through neural streets. Wildflowers in the median, once a collective, now had their own names. Laughter pulled itself out and danced the Fandango over wavy asphalt until speeding boilers caused the giggle...
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"You will know the taste of him for he is delicious like a ripe pear. His kisses rage and bruise like a waters of the sea crashing against the rocks." sat me forward and ignited passion then kinda left me wanting to be honest but thats just me. "But you will search for him anyway. You will ignore the echoes of reason and brave the darkness only to find that he was never really there at all, accept inside your imagination." wrenched my little souls' strings, but my, i adore the overall piece. ...
"reminder that she was defiled" bold and expressive, the word use made me feel it. does paul have a great understanding of what this means? i have not read all but from what ive read it would seem to me that paul has his "love" for her and thats all he sees in his own mind. what about delah? how does she feel toward paul? religion courses through the veins of this piece and takes away from the beauty of a connection between two people. But, though i am very familiar with a variety of religion...
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