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AGE:
22
LOC: Yuba City, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 05
LOC: Yuba City, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 05
I am twenty years old and now live in georgia, I just moved about a month ago from califonia. I lost the love of my life to another woman. I also lost my life to letting my friends influnce me in bad ways. I now live with my mother and find myself in a constant battle of memories trying to overload me mind. I still love to write but dont get to very much on the account that i am working on myself and the relationships that on were nonexistent. I have a few more poems to add though and I hope you all will bare with me. At the age of twenty I have learned that life is a cruel thing. But It seems as if the dark clouds are lifting now but still the poems are a little dark. I have never really been able to write happy poems. Hopefull…
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To touch the soul of a child is like meeting god. The power of faith you instill in that child is forever. But for a child who is not loved, is like living in hell. Her world torn between who to believe Her mother who has hurt like her, Or, Her father a man she barely knows. so many unanswered questions linger like shadows Always looking for answers, but Only getting half truths He wont talk about it She blames him for everything. She loves them both, but is torn Can she find the answers befo...
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The simplest touch could hurt the most, The most loving words can dig the deepest, She cant believe a word they say she has shut out everyone Everyone near her They say they care, but they leave her. They leave her to fight the demons of their past A past she shouldnt have come to know She looks for comfort through the gate of paradise Under the Weeping Willow, that cries in anguish with her It has just as many twisted roots as she does But still she takes cover and waits Waits for an absolut...
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The nightmares over now. I can go on and live, But the hurting wont stop, Even though its been years. I've exhausted my story No one listens now But they still ask me how. They give me pity, they do it cause they think they have to. But I dont need it. Its not their fault. All I want is to be normal. But its hard with the label of a FOSTER CHILD!!!!
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I have worn myself thin to no avail. I need a life but nothing comes. Darkness is closing in The time is coming to an end. There is nothing else to do. I loved you all I could. You act as if nothing is wrong. I am aching for your touch. The need to be loved is to great. There is nothing else for me. You say its over, but I cant let go. I have cried my tears, but you turn away. I am left here on the floor, cold and wanting to feel you close. The darkness is closer now. There is nothing else le...
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I am patiently waiting to be the next Emily Dickinson, So I write and write, Not for the hopes of being acknowledge, but for the joy. I want to win the respect of others as a great poet. That will be my trophy. I am patiently waiting for the next Idea, So I think and think. For the next master piece, But all that flows are my thoughts and feelings, Having your work noticed is the best feeling. This will be my trophy. I patiently wait for the respect. People criticize so badly, But I never giv...
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I love it!!! Its funny and light hearted, still sarcastic. I dont know if you are trying to say not everything needs to rhyme or just venting about people commenting about how you make your peoms rhyme. But i believe you got a great and funny piece of work here. I love the last two lines in the forth stanza. "Its the images found in word, creating pictures to be heard." I believe that to be true. Love the poem and wish to see more of your poems.
I LOVE IT. I feel as if we are spiraling out of control into the black hole. We need to stop all of what wwe are doing. We are ruining our beautiful earth. Everything you write in this poem is ture. from the wars to how society views the earth itself. We are out of control. my fav part is how you start it off. Just those two lines gets you thinking how beautiful mother nature really is. Its sad how you end it. with mother nature giving up. I dont think she is giving up, I believe she has step...
I dont believe you should change a word on this. You speak of truth. I live in georgia where hatered towards the blacks is still here. I cant believe after everything that has gone on and everything they had to put up with in the past they are still put through being hated cause of their skin color. I think it is digusting to hear the "N" word. I cant stand people who are racist, they are the ignorant ones and they should be labled with the "N" word. Thats what it means. People are humans no ...
I Like it. to feel alone is the worst pain I think. I have felt like this many times. My favorite line is "no one has noticed, to them I remain." I feel like this everyday. I believe you did an absolutely beautiful job on expressing your feelings and show your hurt. kudos on your poem and i hope to see more.
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I like this but feel as if it is too short. You dont tell of the torture you go through. You dont show your emtion to what is bothering you. It feels to plain to me and I think if you look deeper then you will a beautiful piece here. But you did well. I hope you dont take this as me being rude or anything. best of wishes to your writing though.
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