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AGE: 34
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 13

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Version 6
7 Reviews   3 Comments
What you see below grew out of playing with words that mean different things in different languages. For example, in my native Russian the phrase "O CHE" can mean "about a dream" or "about sleep", depending on the context. How do I connect that to Che Guevara? Now how do I do it in verse? Here's the result: O CHE I dreamt of Che last night, not sheep. Here's what this dream entailed: Che said he could not fall asleep. He tried some meds. They failed. "Screw ...
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Version 5
6 Reviews   0 Comments
What you see below grew out of playing with words that mean different things in different languages. For example, in my native Russian the phrase "O CHE" can mean "about a dream" or "about sleep", depending on the context. How do I connect that to Che Guevara? Now how do I do it in verse? Here's the result: O CHE I dreamt of Che last night, not sheep. Here's what this dream entailed: Che said he could not fall asleep. He tried some meds. They failed. "Screw ...
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Version 4
3 Reviews   0 Comments
What you see below grew out of playing with words that mean different things in different languages. For example, in my native Russian the phrase "O CHE" can mean "about a dream" or "about sleep", depending on the context. How do I connect that to Che Guevara? Now how do I do it in verse? Here's the result: O CHE I dreamt of Che last night, not sheep. Here's what this dream entailed: Che said he could not fall asleep. He tried some meds. They failed. "Screw ...
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Version 3
0 Reviews   0 Comments
The stuff you see below grew out of playing with words that mean different things in different languages. For example, in my native Russian the phrase "O CHE" can mean "about a dream" or "about sleep", depending on the context. How do I connect that to Che Guevara? Now how do I do it in verse? Here's the result: O CHE I dreamt of Che last night, it seems. The Commie leader railed Against insomnia in my dreams. He tried some meds. They failed. "Screw meds,&q...
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Version 2
3 Reviews   1 Comment
The stuff you see below grew out of playing with words that mean different things in different languages. For example, in my native Russian the phrase "O CHE" can mean "about a dream" or "about sleep", depending on the context. How do I connect that to Che Guevara? Now how do I do it in verse? Here's the result: O CHE I dreamt of Che last night again. The peasants' friend inveighed Against insomnia in my dream. He tried some meds. They failed. "Screw meds,&q...
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Humor/Satire / Plum Crazy (Prologue)
I thought it was very funny. The voice is perfect. I liked the way you gradually, indirectly hinted at what might have happened at that job interview of hers, making the reader guess, making him think a little. Sometimes spelling everything out ruins the fun. "Actually, my real name is Lavinia but who besides my mother..." I would have put a comma after "Lavinia." "It was an such an accident." One of those ans is superfluous.
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