AGE:
24
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 07
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 07
I enjoy reading the work of others…especially good work. I try to give others the benefit of the doubt—in all venues.
I’ve been published here and there, yeah—but it’s never enough. If my university offered a course titled ‘How to Become as Rich and Famous as JK Rowling 101’ I’d be the first to enroll, for sure.
My latest publications can be found www.glassfiremagazine.com or my poetry book, Katharsis lulu.com/twinsisterspublishing
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seeing the world through your camera-- the lens through which you view your world-- shows me so much more than what you've seen, where you've been, who you've loved. seeing your memories along with the stories that come with each image, each new face draws me further into that inner place kept hidden from yourself, from everyone. seeing your self-portraits, the ones you never like because you can't see yourself, even though that man is the same one you see reflected back to you in the mirror...
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seeing the world through your camera-- the lens through which you view your world-- shows me so much more than what you've seen, where you've been, who you've loved. seeing your memories along with the stories that come with each image, each new face draws me further into that inner place kept hidden from yourself, from everyone. seeing your self-portraits, the ones you never like because you can't see yourself as i do, even though that man is the same one you see reflected back to you in th...
Version 1
3 Reviews
5 Comments
seeing the world through your camera-- the lens through which you view your world-- shows me so much more than what you've seen, where you've been, who you've loved. seeing your memories along with the stories that come with each image, each new face draws me further into that inner place you've kept hidden from yourself, from everyone. seeing your self-portraits, the ones you never like because you can't see yourself as i do, even though that man is the same one you see reflected back to you...
Version 1
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her hand brushes mine and the centuries fall away, taking with them the memories, distant and faded, of other lives, with all their mistakes bundled up in messy, string-tied packages—the baggage of failed attempts at perfection. perhaps this is the day she’ll realize that true perfection lies in the acceptance of imperfection. with promises, kisses, slight and tender touches, they tell the the stories—the chronicles of things nobody can disprove from outside &n...
Version 1
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I couldn't help but laugh as Ruth Anne's keys jingled in my pocket as I walked down the narrow aisle to my seat. Sliding over to the window opposite where her car was parked, I shoved my bag halfway under the seat, trapping it between my feet. I leaned against the window, which was cool on my forehead despite the heat hanging in the dry New Mexico air. My last look at Tatum—for a moment I wished I could keep the place and just leave the people behind. Too ...
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I think with some editing and perhaps reformatting you'd have a good piece here. Giving it some structure, ie, breaking it into stanzas, would make a difference on readability...and there are a few spots where the wording is a bit awkward ("She threw the sick to road") but the narrative is good. Keep writing!
I like the idea you've got going here. A little tweaking, and it'd easily be a 'fave.' This line--"turning all different shades of color"--is somewhat odd to me. They turn colors just to turn black? Or do they pool together (as if afraid to be out in the open?) and muddle to black? Rewording would clarify as well as do away with the 'turning/turn' redundancy. My only other issue is the intermittent rhyme...some readers will not mind (or scarcely notice) but it is off-putting for some. Somethi...
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