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AGE:
41
LOC: Wylie, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 20
LOC: Wylie, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 20
I am in the process of writing my first fiction book for publication (I hope). I wrote a book when I was in high school, but when I gave it to my English teacher to read, she lost it. I haven’t seen it in print yet so I guess she was telling the truth. ;) I also write non-fiction. Most of those deal with Christianity, like “Not A Waste”. I’m looking to make new friends, people who can encourage me in my writing and whom I can encourage. Who knows, maybe we could collaborate someday!
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NOT A WASTE After witnessing Fantasia Barrino’s election to American Idol and hearing her sing, “I Believe”, I must admit, I became motivated to follow my own dreams. In the song she says, “I’ve waited for this moment all my life.” How true. Oftentimes, we wait all our lives for moments like these, but they never arrive. Why? There are several reasons: because, like me, we fail to work hard to get what we want or because we fail to visualize what we want so we don’t have a goal for which to s...
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NOT A WASTE After witnessing Fantasia Barrino’s election to American Idol and hearing her sing, “I Believe”, I must admit, I became motivated to follow my own dreams. In the song she says, “I’ve waited for this moment all my life.” How true. Oftentimes, we wait all our lives for moments like these, but they never arrive. Why? There are several reasons: because, like me, we fail to work hard to get what we want or because we fail to visualize what we want so we don’t have a goal for which to s...
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Very interesting. I don't know where you were going with this, if anywhere. Were you going to make him superhuman? With a little retooling, you could have a good story on your hands.
How I came to be here and why are questions that I have asked myself a thousand times, as apart from the broken and fragmented dreams that terrorize my sleep I can remember little of who I am and how I came here before I awoke atop a grass covered hill a week ago.-- You need to shorten this sentence. It stretches across three lines. I started following a stream that was nearby the place I awoke, three days ago I saw smoke on the horizon from what I can only hope is a camp fire, this is a long...
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Second paragraph, passers by should be one word. Fourteenth paragraph, “than night” should be “that night”. Indent paragraph six, section II Section II, thirty-seventh paragraph, She should not be capitalized. Indent 39th paragraph Very good story. Kept my attention. Can’t wait for the rest.
Interesting concept. I believe I see where you are going, but I'm not sure if I understand the whole of your argument. I believe you are positing that if you subtract the universe and everything in it, all you will have left is God. Therefore, God must exist because without Him nothing else would exist since everyting that is has to have come from something. If I'm right, you might want to try using simpler words and concepts than 'magnitude'. If I'm wrong, you can disregard everything I've s...
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