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AGE:
58
LOC: Las Vegas, NV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 27
LOC: Las Vegas, NV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 27
I don’t have a recent photo of just me, so I have chosen to use a photo of my husband and me from last December. I am 57 years old…a wife, mother, and grandmother. I retired in 2000 after 24 years as a grocery checker. I have been married for over 38 years to my high school sweetheart. I am fairly new to MySpace and have started blogging….very strange to me, at first!
I have lived a life filled with good and bad happenings. I have never been very good at expressing the feelings that have come with all those experiences, especially verbally. I have always used writing to make that expression easier. The only things that I have had published are some letters to the editor, to our local newspaper, and one to People Magazine. After th…
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Monday, May 21, 2007 The Story of Michael..... Current mood: anxious Category: Life Today is the day I will start to tell the story of my Michael. I have been building my courage for awhile now. On the news, a short time ago today, I saw the story of one of the local high school's giving a presentation to the student body that re-enacted a drive-by shooting. It was given by a group of students hoping to help end the violence that all of our kids are so familiar with today. It has given me jus...
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I don't believe there is enough content and it is not a strong statement that would get people motivated to act on your suggestions. Grammar and spelling need to be checked...watch for there and their. "It may have suffered"....perhaps We, instead of it? Watch for dropped words..."after being a second chance in life."...after being given a second chance in life.
I love this "mental ramble" of yours! Your advice is right on the money. It all makes sense to me and while I did not find it "funny", I found it very amusing. I do not have any imagination in writing and never would attempt to write any type of fiction, but I love to read sci-fi...fantasy. Your recommendations should help many of those writers out there with terrific imaginations about storyline and trouble with the details. You are a gifted writer and made your points beautifully. By the wa...
Wow, what a complicated love story. A man marries a woman having seven babies from a former lover and claims them as his own. And, she loves his brother!!! I would very much like to read the former chapters to find just how this has come about. To insist on using names from the family of the biological father seems a bit cruel on Tara's part to me. Do mother's really come home from the hospital in three days after having seven babies? Also three weeks seems pretty early for the babies to go h...
Well, an interesting story. Betrayal seems to be a great title for it. Betrayal by a sister. I think there needs to be some explanation about why someone with a limosine would choose to walk the streets of New York late at night. Enjoying the fresh air of New York is not good enough for such young ladies I would think. I would also like to know why there is such a disparity in the fortunes of the two as that seems to be the case. How old are they? I would like to see some stronger reason for ...
This is a very sad story. I take it that this is something that really happened to your family. I would like to see some more editing of the grammar and sentence structure. An example.... "he had come closer to old age then any 24yr old needed to come." ...then should be than... "the blue-ness left her body and anger jumped-started" ...I don't know if blueness is a word but it should not be blue-ness and jumped-started should be jump started.... I found the following sentence confusing..."I s...
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