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AGE:
54
LOC: Spotsylvania, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 23
LOC: Spotsylvania, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 23
Hello,
It is a hard thing to describe onesself.First…I am the worlds worst speller.Self taught is often a poor teacher indeed.What I have always been, is a writer,and I do care what my fellow writers think about my work.But it will not change my style one bit.If I could give one peice of advice to anyone calling him/herself a storyteller, it would be just this; write what is in you to write. If your poetry is what you feel, go for it.If the place inside you is totally chaos, let it rip.Somewhere sometime your true talent will imerge and the story will write itself.Being on urbis is in a lot of ways a humbling experiance.So much talent. Thank you, from my heart.
Grannylee
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As I was walking through our woods checking for winter storm damage, I stopped to rest by the little creek at the bottom of the hill. As I sat listening to the quiet, to my surprise, I heard the sound of tiny bells. A soft tinkling barely there. I had to hold my breath to keep from crying out with delight. Sitting atop a wild cabbage leaf, my eyes beheld a lovely creature.So tiny and bright she was, just tying a necklace of miniature bells around her neck.Her hair of spun gold was wet and she...
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Wow, where to start? I found your characters to be captivating and on the whole very interesting indeed.However, they seemed to bounce around too much to get a handle on who was who in relation to each other. Take a breath and beef up these relationships a bit.A community of characters need to be separated to become individual sometimes.Then a cohesive situation is clearer. Wonderful first draft. I look forward to reading the next draft very,very much.Thanks for allowing me to read your work....
Hello, " The night was black,the car was black, my husbands..." all three collided was wonderful usuage of words to create a picture. Which is what writers are intended to do.You might consider using less short choppy sentences. I feel there is a really poignant poem in your story somewhere begging to be realized. Thanks for allowing me to review your work, Grannylee
You captured my attention immediatly. Good , diagnose showed me right away that it was a doctor, as well as knowing the difference in a high smile and a real one. The reflection of your own demons was wonderful, as was the last line.Well done.Thanks for allowing me to read your work.
Hello, I got a picture of a brother and sister playing a game. Was that correct? I wasn't sure .Good job with actions of rolling the dice. The dice landing on it's side was a good touch, created controversy, brought the reader into the game. More please.Thank you for allowing me to view your work.
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