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LOC: Ajo, AZ
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / ISAIAH 54,16
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He is remembering how hard he struggled ,in the dark pools of the dream world,to wake himself.How long he had this struggle,he could not guess. But now,at long last,he is coming awake.Too late to turn back into his world of dreams,he recognizes,but does not understand that he went into a long and dark sleep for a reason other than being tired or injured. Also, he ponders,If this is true then why did he struggle so very hard to awaken.He knows the answer is there in his sleepy mind somewhere,h...
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Poetry / The unknown dad
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I think of a young man I never knew. Never heard His voice say "DAD". Heard of His troubles. Made me sad. Saw the ripplings in His pond those atrocious ones. Made me mad. Still never heard His voice. Nor the word "DAD". NO TIME busy in my world Then i got the news Sharp steel Dripping blood this young ignored one tears and screams so many lives ruined Survivors i`ve gotten to know and love. Such painful kindness they`ve shared i ponder. i wander. So many lifetimes i percieve. If i`d taken tim...
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Poetry / let me live
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When your world drifts away And you are lost and you are dazed i`ll be here with my rain coat i`ll be here with my pillow i`ll be here with my POE Close the door turn the key Open minds excite me Let me fall from my dark cloud Let me lie on your removed clothes Let me live Let me die Come on me Come on you Come on you Come hear me sing Come hear me say There is only beauty Inside a world, you can remake Come on Don`t throw your life away PEACE
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Poetry / Why Guy?
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people hate she asks why Guy? people mock she asks why Guy? people tell tales she asks why Guy? I speak of war in hell she asks why Guy? i tried to explain i tried to give detail no matter my travail i did fail par or perhaps a pro po or however that goes when finaly and at last i can explain it all her ears wont hear her question to old and all worn out now i know the words to speak should i spit them out all over this page i think i wont cause after all I got it like that
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Don`t listen to the echos any more my Love. Instead, remember. There was no room for the hungry, for the despairing. No room for those who sport a different cloak. Denied the opportunity, to share in the rythm of your beating heart. To share your huntings. To share your gatherings. To share your visions. To share your dreams. i`ve seen your secret smile, i can still feel it at times, at the sound of the thunder, getting nearer and louder. i want the wind of this storm to carry me high. i am w...
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the theme i enjoyed,i would have like it more like"quiet unexpect awaits inside tentative web of memory when friends left every time" cynics venom i really appreciated but i`d have used "for"instead of "because". bitterness....stolen silk, more please!less wordy,more rhyme,great metaphors.
Poetry / To Feel Nothing
Hmm. I want to be your doctor! Nothing are the toys in the playground of nowhere. Which is the realm of demons.Beware,hope is the most popular demon in this arena. But I see a light in that dark place.Happy belongs to you,and no one else.It is yours,like love,can only be shared,but not given,felt and hidden by our most common demon,hope. forgive me my cruel critique. PEACE
Are You talking about boot camp? Maybe I just had a flashback! Ha! But bleed me black? I know I am not a smart one. And I can`t figure that one out? What does that mean? And forgive my ignorance? It`s sound and beat is really pleasant!
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Fatal Kidnapping
Did she finish growing up before the kidnapping,or is she still a child?Perhaps, "As Katie Stone was growing up, she was always fearful that someone was watching her".And "Then the day arrived..."as opposed to.."day came"..and.."she became"..in the same sentence.And also i think "The entire town" instead of "whole town",and "searched frantically" instead.
Poetry / Suicide Club
intelligent you are.Your parameters are far and thick.Reminds me of the era of the beatnick.over my head for the moment.I am thinking of a morgue.A toilet. And psychotropics.Or perhaps embalming fluid.Over my head you are.A funeral for one of the club?I hope to read more urs.
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