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AGE: 40
LOC: Irvine, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 12

I’ve always written poetry and created musical lyrics here & there since my teen years. I have moments when I’m down with a heavy heart and then the words & lyrics come out. I’m trying to focus writing other stuff than just love poems.  I feel I need the guidance so that’s why I’m here.

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In the beginning we can all fall in love instantly...but it is not real love. In time real love will either be the result of that, or will have burned away and you will part. Either way, enjoy the journey
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Lyrics / Fading Away
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Little by little you’re fading away Seems like time could be taking you from me Little by little I’ll set you free As there is no need to come back to me ‘Cause letting go truly is a good thing now So do your part and help me fade away I’ll let you know it truly is a good thing now Just keep on keepin yourself from me Boy, you really don’t know what your doing to me! Got me sitting here doubting myself Always playing that melody! Time to take a quick look at myself ‘Cause letting go truly is ...
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Lyrics / Fading Away
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Little by little you’re fading away Seems like time could be taking you from me Little by little I’ll set you free As there is no need to come back to me ‘Cause letting go truly is a good thing now So do your part and help me fade away I’ll let you know it truly is a good thing now Just keep on keepin yourself from me
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Poetry / Lost
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You lost me long ago Yet now you pull me towards you And I keep trying to pull away You lost me long ago Can’t you remember that day? You told me it was my fault That it was what I wanted Hurting me that way I know in truth it was your anger towards me That made you behave that way It was, after all, the last time I could stay And now you plead to talk to me Telling me you tried so many times before And I still grow weak inside Taking pleasure in your voice But so many things now stand betwee...
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Poetry / On The Defense
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What do you care what I think? How I feel? How I breathe? What could you want from me? What would you like to see? Would you like to see me tremble? Would you like to see my fear? Fear of my unknown? Fear of you? Would it be too much? Am I thinking too hard? Or not hard enough? Overreaction? Possible Isn’t that always? Isn’t that normal? Oh here I go over analyzing again!
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Poetry / Price of gold.
I really enjoyed this. You could probably make it into a song I can sense the melody in it. Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed your last verse most of all "Say you never realize your dreams and we both spend forever looking under bushes and parking blocks for pieces of old watches or lost necklaces that can be sold for scrap metal at a good price." Very creative. Good Job.
Poetry / hit-and-run
I was beginning to feal this and then just as quickly as it starts it ends. Like a tease. So now you leave me wondering and wanting more. I found the structure of your words good though, they flowed well and not one word misspelled. Also, your last verse caught me off guard, like it didn’t belong with the rest of your poem “you’ll pull a thread from your jacket and go.” Could there be more? Other then the ending you where doing a good job with it. Keep up the good work.
Poetry / Dream Vision
Nicely written, I got caught up in your dream as I kept reading. There was only one word that I couldn’t understand and that was in the beginning: “wend”? Did you mean wind? “I wend my way through willows” Otherwise good job!
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Non-fiction / Self Reflection
I really enjoyed reading your piece. In your words: "There can be a downfall to the advice from others. Some mean you harm, while others do not. Simply put, the one’s who don’t care, don’t intend to harm you. I appreciate those pieces of advice." This statements ring true to me as I feel the same way from time to time. I get tired of hearing those close to me say “I only tell you this for your own good” as I never asked to receive their criticism to begin with. People are funny that way. Perh...
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