halebop's profile

halebop avatar
AGE: 51
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 19

Born’58 to actress mother,father a farmer.Accepted Strasberg Acting Inst.L.A.Stella Adler workshop left for Alaska to work as fisherman after Stella’s advice to “go live a life and bring something back” Currently,a Merchant Marine,writing using sense memory approach to create experiments in imaging and time.

Item Stats
Reviewer Stats
Items
Haiku/Senryu / No kings
Version 1
1 Review   3 Comments
 No kings in western culture I see hungry Bodhisattva
Ratings & Rankings
Flash Fiction / "Daddy,don't walk so fast."
Version 1
6 Reviews   5 Comments
                                                                                                                                             &...
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
4 Reviews   6 Comments
Every painted horse,penned Every rusted horse at old adobe' wall All, making their way to and out of the ground. Sidewinders' tails con-trail in sand, Thoughts of her man. Texas farm widow rides ferrous wheels. Last summer Hercules spoke his tractored disc and harrow. Deep plow ran furrow line to porch held boots. Cobbs in 'em now, wheels once turning, stopped,slanted. Dreary-eyed mare just foaled. Widow looks at sky. Her boy had married,gone to town. Last berry pie's in the paine, sunset on ...
Ratings & Rankings
Poetry / Flamenco
Version 3
10 Reviews   4 Comments
Guitars time lifts heel and knee, wrist and fan fall in diminuendo; Islams high howl tap,tap.....fast clapping from close chairs, cigar smoke, burning joss, my eyes begged her to quit the heat from smoke came castanettes I was her slave and fuel to burn
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
9 Reviews   3 Comments
I woke up sober Sunday morning, no money for a Saturday night. A fishermans life I'll flense and flee. Sun blazes on my naked hooks pulled from a naked sea I tie my boat to China beach, railcars filled with toys and dildos; trains to take them off to mart. Hopping off from boat to dock I look for something steady in a sea of change. Compass spinning wildy, I made a bearing through dead reckoning. A billboard sign above the old cannery pointed the way; I'd catch the next bus out. A pensive pa...
Ratings & Rankings
Reviews
Poetry / In Lieu of Love
Premise is juicy.Commitment to death is unquestioned.It accomplishes your goal of sadness for this reader.It has a wonderful objectivity for suicide. Melancholy outdistances the sadness on the retrospect.Brought back shockingly to lifes loss of love.I was caught off step by line 7 with its ref. to time. It made me go back to verify chronology.Very nice to see you back.Friend,H
Poetry / Nautilus of Pain
Hi, I enjoy your work.Title serves the piece as a whole,question in opening line is spinal. Off on desert analogy,line4,would drop"that","the",line3.Would change""do not..." to "beg to" or the like to keep the green light on quest for enlightenment.Strong subject,thanks for sharing,H
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Geniuses of Love
Mox-nix,.....Sex of one,have a dozen of the other.While your points are well taken,no pun intended,isn't all choice and perspective until,as you've done at last line mention love?H
Haiku/Senryu / Tranquility
Hi,sweet little piece.Everything is neatly placed.Might try without "like".H
Good morning,I enjoy the nursery rhyme cadence coupled with blanket dreams.The idea of adventure and adversity just under the blankets safety,warmth,security is strong.My crit. is in formatting to rhyme structure,I know dreams are tough to nail down on the page but maybe a more linear referencing to subject of wolf.I enjoy your style,H
Favorites
ITEMS (12)

 

Poetry / Untitled
Poetry / Personal Dada
Haiku/Senryu / farm
Flash Fiction / The Antique Clock

[ View all ]