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Horror / Nightlife, Ch. 1
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October... He shifted uncomfortably, one eye on the clock, wishing that church could be over with. He really wasn't in the mood for it today, but he couldn't just shirk his duty, could he? Besides, how could you have a sermon without a preacher? Father Raleigh droned through his sermon on autopilot, his mind flitting from subject to subject as his mouth rambled on and on. The clock seemed to be broken, and he had just decided that he would take some of the money from the collection plate and...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Sunday Afternoon
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Click-flash, and the whole scene was bathed in stark white light, making it all the more gruesome. Skeletons, sitting lined up on a park bench, their sightless eyes staring up at the sky. Arthur stood up, wound the film to the next slot, and got to one knee again. He lined up the shot through the viewfinder, thought better of it, and lay prone to maximize the effect. Yes, this shot was better. This shot told a story. Park bench up close, looming in the foreground of the image, massive. Four s...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Tank
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The dog was growling softly, a deep rumbling that made my bowels quiver. He was a big dog, probably about waist high on me, and I was no short-stack myself. His legs were thick with coiled, ropy muscles, and he looked like he wanted nothing more than to lunge at me, maybe see what my windpipe looked like when it wasn't nestled safely in my throat. I'd had this all planned out perfectly. And then the Allens had gotten a dog. Or maybe they'd had it all along and I just hadn't known it. I don't ...
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Short Story / Stacy
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I look up at the clock on the wall, see that it's nearly noon. Six hours until Stacy gets off work. I miss her. For some reason, I feel as though I haven't seen her for ages, even though she left barely two hours ago. I get up and pace around the kitchen for a while, my coffee too hot to drink for the moment. I look in the fridge, not really hungry, just trying to kill time for Stacy to get home. It's our anniversary tonight. I've already ordered the flowers. The delivery man should be here ...
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Short Story / The Pit
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7 Reviews   2 Comments
Each day we go down into the pit, and each day one less person comes back up. We don't know why it's happening, but we're scared. Our numbers continue to dwindle, day by day. At first, we didn't even realize it was happening. Reisman was the first to disappear, and at first we didn't worry too much. We figured that he'd just snuck off to take a snooze somewhere, take a break from the monotony of the pit. That was before we found him. Or rather, his arm. That's all we ever found of him, and so...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Secrets Of The Mist
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All in all, I really enjoyed this. Your descriptions of the various phenomena attributable to time-travel was interesting, but I honestly envisioned more of a twist than the one you went with. I mean, sure, the irony is so thick that you could cut it with a knife, but she's still young enough that she could ditch the whole "perfect man" scenario and find another guy. I was envisioning something much more poignant, such as the discovery during her absence that while you appear younger on arriv...
Horror / Prelude
There really weren't any problems that I could see with your narrative thus far, other than a few of the explanations seemed unnecessary. Perhaps its because I've read numerous other stories that use voodoo/vodun as plot devices, but I found the explanations for bokor/baka/loa/etc. to be almost entirely unnecessary. Also, it kind of creates a hiccup in my reading to see the proper pronunciation of Richard spelled out in parenthesis next to the first usage of the name. If it is important to th...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / New Society-Part 1
It's really hard to judge this piece based on what you admit is "a very rough draft". I like the ideas behind it, i.e. the rich vs. the poor, and I must admit that you definitely piqued my interest with the words "ability to create traps." I grew up watching movies in the eighties where a lot of the magic came from the montages involving creating the traps and weapons prior to the final showdown, a la Lost Boys. If you can capture even half of that magic with this story, then you've already s...
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