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Nobu set out along the Sandspills with his father to learn the Dying Way. He knew nothing of the way himself, nor how it was to be taught. All he knew was that it was the only path he could take, his father gave him no other choice. Before they left the city of Nigura his father presented him with a black palfrey that was more beast than horse, an empty canister of water, and a Kata blade that stood at half Nobu’s height. The desert valley was a harsh road, travelled mostly by Daimos during ...
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I like the opening, and the narrative is really great. You really carve the feel. "to the famous actor Leonard Nimmoy who plays Spock in Startrek" Star Trek is 2 words, and I feel the sentence is a bit of a given. "last of a roll-up" Do you mean fruit roll up...that might paint a better image. I think the images flow together nicely although sometimes the prose is a bit too silly, if that is possible in comedic writing? Overall I liked it and the Spock character is likeable and developed. Goo...
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