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AGE:
18
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 04
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 04
I am a young aspiring writer. Though I am still in high school, I believe myself to be a very responsible and mature individual. My talents lay in expository writing but I my interest is more in creative writing.
I enjoy reading and listening to music. Other random bits about me is that I like the color blue, I am slightly claustrophobic, and I am very open-minded and a bit to the liberal side.
I have two writing profiles; one on Fanfiction and the other on Fictionpress with the username “minijudi”.
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A raven-haired woman pressed herself into the shadows of the dark alleyway. She writhed and twisted her body as if in convulsion. Small beads of sweat fell from her face and neck, leaving a pool of wetness where she lay. The woman bit down hard on her tongue to prevent herself from screaming. She did not dare bring herself to the attention of the night predator. The woman could still remember the man. He was more like a creature, actually. She remembered his tall lithe form. His milky pale sk...
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Your poem is nice and sounds very deep. I'm not much of a poetry person but I do enjoy a couple here and there. Good job and keep up the good work!
This is pretty random and all over the place. I recommend that you structure yourself a bit. However, I'm not much of a poetry person and it could just be my personal bias.
This was very descriptive. At first it caught me off guard because I did not notice the parenthetical "Erotica" warning. Thankfully, I'm not so inexperienced in reading such scenes that I should turn away from it. You are obviously a good writer, and the explicit scene was well...explicit. “You don’t know that Col, he knows who I am! I used to bring fresh muffins to his neighbor, Mrs. Flaherty, remember?” The "fresh muffins" part sent me laughing; it was just too funny how you brought it up r...
Nice use of the bird as a metaphor. The flow is a little of but overall it was sweet.
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