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AGE: 16
LOC: Manistique, MI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 20

I am 16, and a five year guitarist / lyricist. I am greatly inspired by 80’s hair metal music, and glam metal, too. That and alternative rock and grunge are my favorite music genres. I have more of a blues-metal guitar playing style, and write mostly alternative rock/grunge type lyrics, though oftenly I find myself swinging heavier than alternative rock into a metal theme, and many times I am inspired to write power ballads. I am a sucker for ballads, lol. I plan to finish high school and go to college for musical production or performing arts (music). I am not really hoping to be discovered by an agent or publisher through Urbis, as I am sure you know just as well as I do that the chances are very slim. I hope that I can inspire individ…

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Lyrics / For Tomorrow
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verse 1 Seize Lay down your arms And I'll lay down mine We'll lose the war together Stay No need to run Let's stay behind We'll make it better chorus 1 For Tomorrow For Tomorrow verse 2 Stand Rise above yourself Leave behind your sorrow And I'll leave mine Give Live for someone else No need to borrow It's only time bridge 1 Time to make it last Time to stop the fight Time to bury the past Time to make it right chorus 2 For Tomorrow For Tomorrow For Tomorrow For Tomorrow bridge 2 We ...
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Lyrics / Everything
Version 1
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verse 1 fall down to the floor throw me out the door pre-chorus 1 everytime i try to feel i see whats pretend and forget whats real and everytime i fall apart i leave the arrows in my heart chorus she wants everything and everything is all she needs she wants everything but i cant give her what she needs verse 2 break down into bore i've come back for more pre-chorus 2 and everytime i try to feel now it all turns to hurt somehow and everytime i fall apart i leave the arrows in my heart ...
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Lyrics / I Fall Apart
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[guitar intro] [verse 1] and Im standing here again another year gone by we're at the end and im still sore im sure you're probably still bored [pre-chorus] but when you lay your head down are you thinking of me are you thinking of what you left behind [chorus] when I fall apart I die do you shed a tear or cry? can you lay this all to rest? and say that we have nothing left i know you know its not right its not okay but ill be fine please hold on to my heart while i fall apart [guitar fill...
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Poetry / Meaning of Life
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5 Reviews   1 Comment
Lost a population of millions traveling through the cold only one will make it only one will find love Birth brought into this world by someone you don't yet know she carried you she loves you say hello Infancy young, learning as you continue to grow very dependent, you won't make it alone Childhood the first time you will say goodbye you are off to learn, growing older, wiser taught by many with much life experience they will not let you down Adolescence these are the days you have grown mu...
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Quotes / Fame
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10 Reviews   2 Comments
"If that wasn't a close shot at fame, it was a pretty fucking close shot at a close shot at fame" =)
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Lyrics / Bars and Perm Scars
by thomasjohn
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Lyrics / Kiss
by solo
You said honest review, so here goes. This is an odd piece given the theme & that it is about vampires. You have talent, clearly. There is a nice rhyme scheme but I think it lacks the real structure to be considered a lyric. I also had a hard time flowing with the rhythm, and hearing the music in my head was a bit difficult. With that said, I'd think I'd classify this as just a piece of poetry, but that's just me. I could be wrong. That's all for me, best of luck.
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by D_Munn
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Lyrics / Follow Me
by xdannigirl
Well you definitely have some talent here. The verse/chorus/verse/chorus outline seems to flow nicely with the lyrics written. I would work at it a little yet, though, as the lyrical structure as a whole sort of lacks something it is needing. Perhaps try to stay away from the every-other-line rhyme-scheme so much, as it begins to get repetitive & it just seems to drag on unchanged. But that's about it, I would mix it up just a little bit and maybe change out a few words here or there, but all...
Quotes / 12 word quote
by cooljim102055
oh, oops I'm not sure what it implies but I didn't feel like skipping, sorry. but anyway, it just caught my attention because it's very good and sort of insightful, though im not sure how it could be insightful to myself if i am unsure of the implication. however, it sounds very bright and very intelligent, and i like it a lot. im adding it to my favorites. great job guy.
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