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If the devil wears Prada then my Nike’s are laced up to get the hell out of Purgatory
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If the devil wears Prada then my Nike’s are laced up to get the hell out of Purgatory The inner workings of Corporate America use to fascinate me, specifically during my junior year in college. I can recall having such an indestructible feeling of going out into the world, making a name for myself with somebody's major corporation, and eventually taking over the business that I had been selected to become a part of. However, reality hit me after I walked across the stage, accepted my degree, ...
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Chorus I thought I lost it but I found myself in you I felt I couldn't make it but I found myself in you it’s been a struggle but I know now what I must do thank you for the chance to let me find myself with you 1st verse in a city so big it’s hard striking out on your own in a world that wants to see you fail its there in your arms I’ve found a home and I'm so pleased with these findings no more gray skies getting in my way as long as you're here by my side I’ll keep a smile tattooed on my f...
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i absolutely love men who are sexually intelligent - you know being able to take something as small as a mere blow on the neck to make the panties come tumbling down! or using a rose instead of a finger tip to do the job of seducing your partner's belly button. even the way you look at an individual can leave a person "cumming" or "going" in or away from your direction. SI (sexual intelligence) isn't something that occurs overnight tho'....years of serious dedication (and off the chain fuckin...
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you should work on your format when drafting your stageplays. including the director's action is a must. in regards to your dialogue, i assume that this play is on a comedic style, which made me want to read more. specifically how the two will possibly botch the hit. continue to work on this. it reads well, but it was the format that lost me
i commend you on trying to knock the writer's block. i wish this could have flowed a little better with a few rhyming lines. i wouldn't stop writing though. your flow is right around the corner.
this is very touching. you are so right in your opening statement. in life you will often encounter a blessing out of a burden/tragedy. and thru tragedy do we realize what matters the most in life. in regards to your red stars, don't worry hon. sometimes those that DO care for us the most are unable to show it. those that are still there in your life care for you. i would say open up your writings to them so they understand where your thoughts are. it may open them up more than you realize
its ironic how i use to write poems the exact same way, but i used lyrics throughout the entire piece. its great to have a muse that can move you like that. submit a few more, then look over the old ones and remix them (metaphors come in handy with poetry like this (i.e. "like Ms. coco before her soul got saved i'm so into you/amd i know more about getting caught up in the rapture than Anita do/). overall though i like it
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