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“Give me the time. Did you hear me? Give me the time!” “What?” I said confused. “What’s wrong with you boy? I asked you what the time was.” Said my commander, Admiral Yamamoto Isoroku, from the other end of the headset. Oh, ooh, um, it’s exactly seven forty-three sir.” “Boy, we are less than ten minutes away from bombing Pearl Harbor Hawaii and you have your head in the clouds.” “Yes, quite literally actually.” I l...
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A waterfall glistens in the warm sunlight. The soft roars of water sweetly sing. To many, it is just a waterfall. But there is a special kind of gift, Given to only those who seek beauty. Beauty, not of riches, but of earth. A mountain stretches high above the earth, Reaching for the warmth of the sunlight. Its curves and ridges are more than beauty. Nothing compares to its lovely gift. Creatures below listen to it sing, Songs of wonder, beauty, and waterfalls. A white bird si...
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My destination is not near nor far. My destination surrounds me and is not of this world. For my destination is beyond the clouds, the planets, and the stars. My true, and final destination, is made for me, my unearthly home, Heaven.
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My destination is not near and not far. My destination is not of this world. For my destination is beyond the clouds, the planets, and the stars. My true, and final destination, is made for me, my unearthly home, Heaven.
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Kaitlyn sits in front of her TV. A news reporter frantically directs families to lock their doors, "A murder, no, three, have been reported in Clousey county on Summersville road." Kaitlyn gets up to lock the door when the phone rings. Cautiously, she picks up the phone and hears her mom, obviously scared. "I'm fine mom I swear. I'm eighteen now!" Hanging up the phone, she remembers to lock her door. She starts to sit at her kitchen table, but she hears something approachi...
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Kaitlyn sits in front of her TV. A news reporter frantically directs families to lock their doors, "A murder, no, three, have been reported in Clousey county on Summersville road." She gets up to lock the door when the phone rings. Cautiously, she picks up the phone and hears her mom, obviously scared. "I'm fine mom I swear. I'm eighteen now!" Hanging up the phone she remembers to lock her door. She starts to sit at her kitchen table but she hears something approaching. Sh...
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