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LOC: Danvers, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 06
LOC: Danvers, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 06
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I cannot even begin to explain my hatred for Matthew Atkinson during my elementary/middle school years. He was a know-it-all loser who just loved to make fun of me. He was big and goofy, and I never really gave him a second thought unless my friends and I were making fun of him by the monkey bars during recess. Don’t get me wrong, I wasn’t exactly the most popular girl in the cafeteria, but he was just… well, revolting. Funny, how things change. I’m sure if my fifth grade self saw me falling ...
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the prologue is deffinently an attention grabber! i especially liked the way you characterized Dean, Davis and Carrie. This is going to be very suspenseful i can tell! I can't wait to see more!
This is very intellectual and adult content coming from a 15 year old. Sorry. I'm not trying to sound better than you for being a year older. Ha. This was very interesting and in some parts very true. You're completely on you're way to being one hell of a good writer.
I really loved this! I'm a sucker for romance stories! In the beginning it was a little difficult to decipher between Julia and her mother, but otherwise,awesome job with characterization! I especaually liked the convorsation between Julia and Casey at the end. It really helps show Julia's witty character. I can't wait to see what happens next!
I loved this. You really captured the voice of the narrator. It was funny, but didn't take away from what the story is about. I can't wait to read the rest!
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