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AGE: 20
LOC: Woodstock, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 02

im a 20 year old guy from ga currently going GSU I write not because I think im good or because I think I can make money off it I write because it makes me happy if you have a birthday or special something you want a poem for message me and ill write you something or at least try to just dont get tick if it isnt any good

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Poetry / My death row
Version 1
7 Reviews   5 Comments
I saw god in the hall so I asked in this world of sin give me something to believe in before all I have known starts to fall I look around and all I see are kids on drugs and gun toting thugs is this really how its supposed to be is this the world you created with death and violence where innocent voices go silent or was it simply fated why would you put someone through this watching their friends die souls rotting from the inside I feel like there was a meeting I missed its just not fair I a...
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Poetry / Where am I???
Version 1
7 Reviews   3 Comments
I am currently completely smashed not to be confused with when I am simply trashed your face has been on my mind all night and I decided that this simply wasn’t right so I blurred the image with a few shots I still don’t know if that was right or not because I know you will be back just as my mind is getting racked with the guilty crimes I committed hoping my conscious would simply omit it now not only have I lost you but I have guilt added on too drinking didn’t solve a thing it only gave my...
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Short Story / This seat taken?
Version 1
6 Reviews   0 Comments
This seat taken? You’re the emptiness the world sings at night wait that didn’t come out right you’re what angels sing in the sky wait that sounds like a lie why cant you just be mine I am so sick of trying lines Can I just be holding you in my arms Instead of seducing you with my charms These words just cheapen the feeling That my mind is still reeling From the first time I saw you face With all its beauty and grace Damn it!! Why is this so hard Why do I have to go the extra yard Make sure e...
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6 Reviews   1 Comment
I love what no one else could for she hides with in a hood she is hiding from the cold at least that is what I am told but I don’t believe this I think she is still hiding from his fist afraid of making mistakes doing what ever it takes to avoid the pain just trying to stay sane she loved him so much it took her years to fear his touch and many more to leave the dark but he had already left his mark not on her skin but on her mind a mark that was most unkind she is now trapped in her hood wis...
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6 Reviews   0 Comments
trying not to look trying not to care trying to act like your not even there trying? if only that was all it took it would take an act of god to ignore you and I am simply a man without even a leg to stand so you draw my attention like so few I don’t think you notice me I am just a simple guy no matter how hard I try that is just how I will always be I am still allowed to hope and that is all I seem to do hoping that I can be with you even if I look like a dope but which is worse hoping for w...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / pheonix
good
Novel Treatments / Sundown in the Sinkhole (I)
Removed
Poetry / My Last Sorry
need to work on the rhyme
Poetry / 2 Buck Chuck
the poem loses its flow and rhyme in places abcb is the rhyme you have for most of the poems but you lose it in the 1st and 6th staza you lose it and it hurts your flow i think if you just work on the flow the peice has great potential
the main thing I found with this story are the humanity of the characters they are not shown in the best of light in fact its very dark at times but it seems to add a great deal of human quality to them and the realism of how people in real life are not perfect very good work keep it honest I feel thats the most important thing if you start trying to hold back it will deeply hurt the stories authenticity which is its biggest selling point ive dated 2 cutters in my life and have had an experia...
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